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Author no need to show such a huge amount of chat of different people. 4 to 5 are already max.

why is the chat dialogues being repeated ? this already happened a few times and not just the chat dialogues even some big paragraphs are getting repeated in the next chapter. Author the novel is good but please resolve these issues as this looks like you are just increasing the word count.

Author just add Dark as the genre so that many readers (those who don't like forced plot and psychopath mc which doesn't fall in the category of just villain tag) so they don't have to waste their time to read this novel

now who is this ? ... Author there are way too many inconsistencies with the character names.

author use ' ' for thoughts and " " for talking. otherwise it will be very confusing to read

green ? ... goblin ?

Author you need to explain these things, like how they work, what are the leveling system, etc and not expect the readers to understand it magically without any hint and then you start abusing your own readers due to your own plot holes.

no issue, take proper rest and then upload the chapters

this looks good, keep it this way

Not funny 😒