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Aella_Stormwind
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2022-12-08 02:40

Another excellent work by our One_Winged_Angel!! The prose flows well, the scenes are vivid and descriptive. The pacing is well thought out, and the subject matter is very interesting. I'm eager to see where this one goes!! Keep it up.

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Idczhen
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Ok, let's begin with starting that this novel description in detail is unreal. If I have to compare this novel descriptive ability, then it's on par with "Lord of the Mysteries". Everything was explained in precise detail and so was the action that allows you to have imagery of what the scene was like. Writing Quality- 5/5, As I've said, this novel's grammar is above-average and could be on par with some of the top novels. There wasn't a paragraph or sentence that I read have some problems with it. Not to mention, the author is capable of using some high vocabulary words and it amazed me. Stability of Updates- This is a more straightforward point and it's 5/5. The novel is updated every day, so unless the author decides to take a hiatus, the rating shall remain at 5. Story Development- 5/5, I know people might think I'm just bootlicking the author, but no. Why I give this a 5/5 because of the detailed prelude of the first volume that gives us the background that we need to understand what is going on and what the novel is about. Not to mention, the author was able to create a character, namely, the grandma, and gave us a realistic feel of her character being real. It didn't even take me a few minutes before I was immersed in the storyline and connected to the character. Note: once you finish the prelude, then you will understand what I mean. I can't give many spoilers because it'll ruin the fun for you. Character Design- 4/5, Although the main character, Jackson and his grandma was well created and managed to immerse me, there were simply too many characters introduced in the latter part. It was overwhelming at times that I don't even remember who's who and what was her role again in the story. It just kind of feel a bit lackluster since we didn't receive as much detail and background of the character compared to the Main Character and his grandma. Hopefully, in the latter chapters, the author can continue to introduce the character slowly and let the reader have a breather to get to know the character well before storming off to another introduction. World Background- 5/5, The world is described beautifully in the prelude and already gave a glimpse of what the world had become and how it's beginning to operate. I especially love the part where the author spends a lot of attention in detail regarding how humans have lost their advanced technology and kind of regressed to medieval kind of times. And a bonus point is added for the clever usage of Warlord which is similar to history where Warlords abused their power and take control of lands. TLDR: Overall, the novel is definitely at the top percentile with its well-constructed story and detailed explanation of actions from the main character, Jackson or Jax. On top of that, there are little to zero grammatical mistakes and you can read smoothly. Though, if you are the type to not enjoy novels such as "Lord of the Mysteries", then the attention to detail might bore you. This novel takes the slow pace road and doesn't rush things which is great. This was reviewed by a Doraemon on December 14, 2022

BishopsNemesis
BishopsNemesisLv1

There are spoilers in this review please read with caution :) Based on the 10 chapters of the novel that I have read, it is clear that the world building is well thought out and immersive. The setting of the story, Duskgate, is a city surrounded by stone walls that is built on top of an ancient tower known as God's Tower. The existence of these towers, which can be found throughout the world, has had a profound impact on society and has led to the formation of organizations like The Climber's Association, which is focused on ascending the towers. The characters in the novel are also well-developed and dynamic. Jackson, the protagonist, is a strong and determined individual who has faced numerous challenges throughout his life, including the disappearance of his father and the death of his grandmother. Despite these tragedies, he remains determined to uncover the truth and find his place in the world. One aspect that could have been improved upon in the novel is the pacing. At times, the story feels slow and dragged out, particularly in the earlier chapters. However, the action and tension pick up significantly as the story progresses, making for a more engaging and thrilling read. Again this is my opinion based on the 10th chapter. Overall, the world building and characters in the novel are well-crafted and provide a solid foundation for the story. Some tightening up of the pacing would have made for a more cohesive and enjoyable reading experience. One quote from the novel that particularly stands out is when Jackson's father writes in his diary, "You will find all the answers at the top of God's Tower." The mystery surrounding Jackson's father is an interesting and intriguing aspect of the story. It is clear that his father has been absent for much of Jackson's life, but there are hints that he may still be alive and that there are forces preventing him from returning home. The mention of God's Tower and the clues left behind in his father's diary suggest that there may be a deeper mystery at play, possibly involving the towers and the forces that control them. This adds a layer of mystery and intrigue to the story and leaves readers wanting to know more. Characteristics of Jackson in my perspective: Jackson seems to be a determined and resilient individual who has faced a lot of hardship in his life. He has lost his father and grandmother and has been forced to live in an orphanage, where he has been subjected to physical labor and dangerous tasks. Despite these challenges, he remains determined to find his missing grandmother and uncover the truth about his father's disappearance. He is also described as being physically fit and skilled in martial arts, as he is shown practicing with wooden sticks in the courtyard. Additionally, he seems to be kind and empathetic, as he is concerned about the well-being of his fellow orphans and is willing to help them in any way he can. Overall, Jackson seems to be a strong and resourceful character who is not afraid to face adversity and is driven to uncover the truth.

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