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Kirito_K5
Kirito_K5Author1yr
2023-05-10 07:02

Yo, Author here, Kirito_K5, rewriting this review for new readers. The beginning chapter for about 30 chaps in, are not exactly impressive, but you have to understand, it was learning to write well at that point. I noticed my improvment from around the second arc, the vampire raid, and my story writing took a good turn during the war arc. I ask that you be patient enough and get to the 2nd arc before deciding if you want to drop or not. All love added.❤️

Reincarnated with an Analysis system.

Kirito_K5
4.1
245 Chs

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SeventhEvil
SeventhEvilLv14

Author can i have the disc link? The current one is expired

1yr
Chaos_Order8
Chaos_Order8Lv5

Author did u drop your Fate FF?

1yr
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Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTRLv15

hey author quick question before I read this is there any yuri in this not a fan

1yr
Kirito_K5
Kirito_K5Author

Lol no Yuri, why would u assume this?

Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR:hey author quick question before I read this is there any yuri in this not a fan
1yr
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Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTRLv15

Well some authors usually just add it in because its a harem but thays perfect ill give a read 😊

Kirito_K5:Lol no Yuri, why would u assume this?
1yr
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Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

that's good to know 😊👍

Kirito_K5:Lol no Yuri, why would u assume this?
1yr
Tzevaot
TzevaotLv13

he is scared to confront such a weak minded mc you have made. Disappointed. 😞

1yr
PatrioticZ
PatrioticZLv15

seems interesting but needs a lot more for me to start reading or at least 1 chapter a day or more

1yr
Kirito_K5
Kirito_K5Author

I took a break and just recently started updating, so it's understandable

PatrioticZ:seems interesting but needs a lot more for me to start reading or at least 1 chapter a day or more
1yr
Eternal_Shu
Eternal_ShuLv13

Author when is a new chapter coming??

1yr
PatrioticZ
PatrioticZLv15

will keep an eye out 😁

Kirito_K5:I took a break and just recently started updating, so it's understandable
1yr
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Psan
PsanLv6

Well... its not bad... but its filled wirh plotholes, inconsistencies and mistskes. He allows mc to do actions that should be impossible for him to acomplish... he was a regular highschool boy and he can dodge a veteran sword strike, catch arrows midflight from elves with his hands. Wield a sycth so well. He can block a rain of arrows from dozen epves with ease???? He did not had any combat skill at all... and mc is so confident lol... not even 1 day and he orders elves to bring him to a F phoenix to desl with thst has been terrorizing elves for hundreds of years?.... you must smoke a lot of wêęđ lol.

2yr

Alanray64
Alanray64Lv15

Typical story line where MC dies and is reincarnated with a system. Low EQ male with a number of love interests and no clue on how to deal with them. Elements of kingdom building, though it is not to advanced at the moment. Overall it is an interesting novel, though the only negative drawback is that the author hasn’t taken time to proofread his novel. The number of grammar and spelling mistakes is not pleasant to the eyes. I recommend the author take some time out and check his writing in advance. Anyways, it isnt to bad of a read. 👍

2yr
Innocent_Girl_5403
Innocent_Girl_5403Lv12

fabulous story.... great book..... well done

2yr
Rafael_Loki
Rafael_LokiLv12

Slime but wo everything that makes it great. The plot is rushed and convenient. I love harem, but the sequence of events are ridiculous and mc actions are nonsensical. I know that there is some profound plot behind his actions, but there is no build up to that plot. The reader is throw out of the loop far to many times and a "notes" chapter shouldn't be necessary to fill plotholes.

2yr
SnowApathie
SnowApathieLv4

A well done story .

2yr
the_god_of_plot
the_god_of_plotLv4

while reading the synopsis should I read this or not, hmm saw "fan of rimiru tempest" yep def reading this

1yr
Man_of_culture
Man_of_cultureLv11

There are so many grammar mistakes, or just mistaking a word for another. The story leaves a lot of essential things out. Hope the author will make a few edits on the first few chapters so at least the new readers could get invested in the novel.

1yr
EdgeLord_23
EdgeLord_23Lv13

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Tubbtle
TubbtleLv4

thought it was reincarnated with anal'¡tic' and clicked on this

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