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xNoReadNoLifex
xNoReadNoLifexLv52yr
2022-12-08 03:39

After 13 completed chapter. This is good. So far there are no idiotic decisions being made by the mc. His actions make sense and we can see what other people surrounding him thinks of him. Already he is making plans to improve his powers. Advise: He should try to either improve his spy network or talk to his subordinates to make sure they report important event to him. Ex1: Spoiler: They should have told him about the wage gap as soon has they learned about it. Ex2: Spoiler: They should have came to him immediately when they learned that the cost of paper is more in GOT. Overall this is a great story. It has a lot of potential.

Blood And Iron GoT)

Chill_ean_GUY
4.7
87 Chs

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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

he doesn't make stupid decisions? being religious means being stupid first off. lol second, he allowed his fake exiled soldier now mercenary to erase a whole city. innocent and all. if he wasn't controlling the consequences then every kingdom would wage war on him. anyone believing a king would allow 30k to leave without repercussions is dumb and not an excuse.

2yr
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xNoReadNoLifex
xNoReadNoLifexLv5

This was written at the time that there was only 13 chapter. So at that time the decision were not idiotic. Additionally, religion is everywhere. There not a single aspect of our world today not affected by it. Don’t get me wrong I am not religious but if religion is everywhere it is better to use it to your own benefits.

DetachedDreamer:he doesn't make stupid decisions? being religious means being stupid first off. lol second, he allowed his fake exiled soldier now mercenary to erase a whole city. innocent and all. if he wasn't controlling the consequences then every kingdom would wage war on him. anyone believing a king would allow 30k to leave without repercussions is dumb and not an excuse.
2yr
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anubis1650
anubis1650Lv5

I have to say I was not too enthusiastic about reading this at first but I figured to give it a try and I was glad I did. The first chapter was a little rough to get through but it was actually necessary. While it's not an amazing fanfic but it is a good one although the story is a little fast-forwarded but not to the point where you're missing a lot it just hurts the character development slightly. Though if you're looking for a super-powered Reincarnator this is not the fanfic for you.

2yr

Hit30
Hit30Lv13

I like this fanfiction, it has: Somewhat unique storyline Alright Character Design Good grammar (At least, I think it is good) Great update stability

2yr
Jimbai3870
Jimbai3870Lv4

I don’t even understand what’a actually going on. Like is this game of thrones or what. like Im so confused. C………!;?44)4$?8:?3&4)4?3….. . .

2yr
sapient
sapientLv4

don't like it, lived millions of years and does not act like it. had some of his bad memories removed, meaning experience removed.

2yr
Chill_ean_GUY
Chill_ean_GUYAuthor

Hello here the author, I write this story at the suggestion of a friend who wanted to do it, but he was called to the compulsory military service of our country, my English is not good, but I work hard to learn, I hope you can be patient with my mistakes and point them out. I know I am not the most knowledgeable of the GOT saga; however, I read the books constantly to improve the story.5 stars because I can XD

2yr
Rafa_TAM
Rafa_TAMLv5

I loved the story, the armor of the Prussians is ahead of the GOT universe, in my opinion you are putting together the prologue and then move on to the time of the 1st season of GOT. The love interest is difficult since in the south is the Faith of the seven, your men fought a war of Faith for 20 years, in my opinion you would have to look for a young lady and instill in her the Protestant Faith. It's hard there. Greetings from Argentina.

2yr
aal1023
aal1023Lv14

I did like reading it until i read that the character hated sunni Muslim it made me uncomfortable. if you don't mind that the the story is good and the author is doing a good job

2yr
Kingofmusic
KingofmusicLv2

good so far.............................................................................................................................................

2yr
RENSHU
RENSHULv4

Only have read several chapters yet. Please correct me if I am wrong. Suggestion, use "speech" for speaking. 'thoughts' for inner voice. Apologies, but sometimes the dialogues are clunky and feels empty. This is only my opinion and preference you do not need to conform with it, but I think this type of stories is better written in third person specially if it is about politics and kingdom building, I think this method offers more freedom on description and worldbuilding. First person really lacks details and a general overview of a situation thus why the flow is a bit chaotic because we can only see what the character see. Though still this a good story among the many here in webnovel.

2yr
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