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Quintin_Quilario_4261
Quintin_Quilario_4261Lv11yr
2022-12-29 20:34

Overall... The story is very food. I just have one very irritating problem... Alex is way too passive and a pushover. At first it comes off as very kind and humble, then it became pretty stupid, to annoying then very irritating. He has all that money and connections but can't even protect is girlfriend. He literally promised to her dying mother that he would do everything to protect her daughter. It would have been ok if all those tragedy only happens to him but no, debbie suffers the worst. Actually I was kinda relieved that Debbie escaped this sorry excuse of a man, then she would probably can live peacefully. I mean if he really loved Debbie he should have announced to the whole world the she is the future Mrs. Ambrose that way no one would dare to put their hand on her. I get that he would prefer not to be seduced by a bunch of gold diggers, and like to lay low, but if he truly loves Debbie he would endures those things for her... Just want to get my thoughts out of my head and find someone to rant. And for the Author...I know it is written like this for the sake of the further part of the story, but its just too much. Who would endure something like this if they have the ability to prevents those events from happening, especially seeing his significant other being tormented. At least put some little satisfying moments every now and then. And please just kill Cathy...

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alkage_mo
alkage_moLv3

i could compare you to one of the thorntons in the family, quick at taking actions without thinking them through. Imagine DEBBIE announced worldwide as miss Ambrose, do you think she would survive the attackers if they all focused on the girl,

Siddhant_Malik_
Siddhant_Malik_Lv4

what about going in singing compition she was almost killed

Saurabh_Goyal_7332
Saurabh_Goyal_7332Lv1

I agree with you. he seems stupid sometimes and extra emotional. This seems like how he can control big business with such an attitude.

DeAundre_Conner
DeAundre_ConnerLv2

Alex has too many jobs that he gets up and leave without return. Alex has all these resources but pretends during crucial moments they’re nonexistent. He has powers and became a God but somehow forgets to use them when in obvious moments forgets. Debbie needs a round the clock security at all times. What happened to Nathan and Alex’s beef? Alex should move onto Lindsey or Kelli… What’s Tom secret towards Alex?

DeAundre_Conner
DeAundre_ConnerLv2

What happened to the Doctor Competition? Officer Green and why haven’t the Moon Palace checked in with Alex lately? Would Alex ever finish school?

Daoist0ZTrir
Daoist0ZTrirLv1

I agree

Jamie_Otubu
Jamie_OtubuLv2

my question is when Alex pick up the tricolour flower. what happened to Debbie

Jamie_Otubu
Jamie_OtubuLv2

hi thanks for the good works pls provide insta millionaire episodes 885 The celestial road... its different from the other insta millionaire you posted here. Well for me I feel the other version is better than the version of Alex just staying in the forest. thanks

Jamie_Otubu
Jamie_OtubuLv2

hi thanks for the good works pls provide insta millionaire episodes 885 The celestial road... its different from the other insta millionaire you posted here. Well for me I feel the other version is better than the version of Alex just staying in the forest. thanks

DeAundre_Conner:What happened to the Doctor Competition? Officer Green and why haven’t the Moon Palace checked in with Alex lately? Would Alex ever finish school?
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Happy_Zahn
Happy_ZahnLv1

Do not get started. Story is pretty interesting but characters and setting are uneven. It is set in an alternative United States, NY where Businesses, Mafia, Government, and Karate people rule. Writing is often uneven. Events change sometimes, numbers change sometimes between chapters. Have to just let changes to characters or events not get to you. Alex is smart and dumb depending. He usually makes bad choices. He purposely lets situations get out of hand or goads people to hate/berate him. Gets a bit tedious at points as important part of living in society is publicly berating 'poor' people or people who dress normally, over and over and over. The story abruptly ends at 748 'golden eggs' and becomes new story at 749 'underground' with just Alex and cosmic karma magic realms with continuous tedious fights and new cardboard characters that you won't care about. It then ends up with Alex being an infinite-universes/multiverses timeline watcher/Fate and Alex messes around with different timelines for a while. He gets bored along with the reader, then literally jumps into a new timeline/universe where he forgets everything except what the new-timeline Alex knows. Its a different story starting at 886 'back to earth' with womanizing Alex with dramatic Debbie and (Yvonne since when?). Everyone is sleeping around and no one is really the same - liked the horse though - only character with real character. If you start the series at all, Stop reading/listening at 749. Gets tedious and story gets even more unsequenced and unbalanced after that.

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