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Skarlet_Retro
Skarlet_RetroLv151yr
2022-11-30 08:42

Good story, but not worth read after chapter 40 because they keep that very one thinks he poor and lying thing Going when he have be shown and seen spending large amounts of money. And we still know nothing about the family or his place in the family so, we know nothing about why he's even has to go through all this mess. Reviewed at chapter 42

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Manveer_Singh_2364
Manveer_Singh_2364Lv1

So tru but i read almost 450 chapters🥲

Skarlet_Retro
Skarlet_RetroLv15

mc is to passive and just let's everyone do what they want knowing it won't end well for him, author seems to be setting up a misunderstanding arc that will make use questione who's he going to end up with, when we all know it Debbie Reader up to 89

Daoist12uNyR
Daoist12uNyRLv2

how can you read upto 450 when there's only 170 or so here?

Manveer_Singh_2364:So tru but i read almost 450 chapters🥲
Daoist66W4wt
Daoist66W4wtLv13

The Mc is an idiot and simp

David_Abrams
David_AbramsLv2

Good story but after Alex came back from the desert after the bombing, everything became complicated and now the story is not interesting😞😞😞

Valerian_Kessy
Valerian_KessyLv2

i read up to ch 566

Daoist12uNyR:how can you read upto 450 when there's only 170 or so here?
nash_nario
nash_narioLv2

yes its true😅

David_Abrams:Good story but after Alex came back from the desert after the bombing, everything became complicated and now the story is not interesting😞😞😞
Donovan_Harvey_0442
Donovan_Harvey_0442Lv1

Please seek help if you listened to 450 episodes

Manveer_Singh_2364:So tru but i read almost 450 chapters🥲
Donovan_Harvey_0442
Donovan_Harvey_0442Lv1

Maybe they meant 45. Anyways 170 is insane. This should've lasted an episode and ended

Daoist12uNyR:how can you read upto 450 when there's only 170 or so here?
DeAundre_Conner
DeAundre_ConnerLv2

I read up to 1014

Valerian_Kessy:i read up to ch 566
Akindave
AkindaveLv2

continue reading. The story really changed from Alex being poor. he achieved great things without his family's name later on. the story is interesting.

Johnson_Wepukhulu
Johnson_WepukhuluLv1

I have read up to chapter 923, they are all there. My confusion is after attaining god status, he is pushed back to earth and is in his normal business, but in the desert, he had killed Riley Naysmith, now again he is alive and the rivalry resumed. The latter detonates his pharmaceutical factory and everything burns except him, his assistant Dangles, and his cat, Budge. How many lives does Riley Naysmith have? Again his grandfather Lincoln Ambrose had been funding Naysmith to destroy Alex Ambrose, just interested to know how the story winds to an end.

Reuben_Mburu
Reuben_MburuLv2

I just finished episode 1014 but the book seems to continue

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Happy_Zahn
Happy_ZahnLv1

Do not get started. Story is pretty interesting but characters and setting are uneven. It is set in an alternative United States, NY where Businesses, Mafia, Government, and Karate people rule. Writing is often uneven. Events change sometimes, numbers change sometimes between chapters. Have to just let changes to characters or events not get to you. Alex is smart and dumb depending. He usually makes bad choices. He purposely lets situations get out of hand or goads people to hate/berate him. Gets a bit tedious at points as important part of living in society is publicly berating 'poor' people or people who dress normally, over and over and over. The story abruptly ends at 748 'golden eggs' and becomes new story at 749 'underground' with just Alex and cosmic karma magic realms with continuous tedious fights and new cardboard characters that you won't care about. It then ends up with Alex being an infinite-universes/multiverses timeline watcher/Fate and Alex messes around with different timelines for a while. He gets bored along with the reader, then literally jumps into a new timeline/universe where he forgets everything except what the new-timeline Alex knows. Its a different story starting at 886 'back to earth' with womanizing Alex with dramatic Debbie and (Yvonne since when?). Everyone is sleeping around and no one is really the same - liked the horse though - only character with real character. If you start the series at all, Stop reading/listening at 749. Gets tedious and story gets even more unsequenced and unbalanced after that.

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