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the original minato is much better than this copy, author nerf mc........................................................................................................................

Like most of his stories it’s soooo slow. Like infuriatingly slow. It’s seems to be a trend in all of his works, some more than others. I just read 13 chapters but not even 2 days had passed in the story. Sure it builds immersion and stuff but there’s so much description of his thoughts for every action he or anyone else takes so I find myself skimming most of it. The writing is superior to most of the other fanfictions on here and I’m sure there’s already a set direction which he is going to take the story in. It’s a story you can read when you’ve got nothing else that is good but not something which makes you want more and more of it.

Reveal spoiler

Você está alongando demais a história que já ficou chata, você não está entrando em nada de interessante e não está criando um enredo original, está fazendo muito filler, assim como em seus outros trabalhos. Espero sinceramente que você não continue assim.

The story is slow, got bored after a few chapters. The MC is dumb as rocks, repeating the same mistake endlessly. The author nerfed the MC to the point where a 6 yrs old needs to tell him to "calm down". The logia fruit is not doing logia stuff. The only good part, so far, is the grammar. Pretty much a sh** show. Will replace the review later if I change my mind, in case I ever continue reading.

We're starting the story for now, so I don't have much to say.... the story is well written, but the update rate is a little bad, mainly because the author posts the chapters and deletes them to change something .... but that's not a bad thing, it's just that we've been at the same point in history for some time

Love the story, its a slow progress type of fic but it builds the characters and interactions, and makes them more relatable and believable. Great take on the relationships between characters as well. Good job, keep it up