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KhyaaL
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2023-03-11 00:40

I'm absolutely addicted to this ongoing WebNovel! The author's writing is so descriptive that I feel like I'm right there in the story with the characters. The world-building is so well-crafted and the characters are so relatable that I'm emotionally invested in their journeys. I can't wait to see how this story ends and I highly recommend it to anyone who loves an ongoing read!

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Duke_Asmodeus
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Your Dukes Shameless Review! This novel is something special for me, started as a simple passion project and seemed very popular with my other readers and new ones. All the things I have learned from Summoner and Vampir were used to create a better world and atmosphere from chapter 1. Also, prepare yourself a dark room with no disturbances when the chapters with [eighteen] appear... Just trust me! My lemons are intense and filled with detail and passion. No one line and poor attempts at them. This novel will be full of emotions, action, and adventure while Zell explores his second life and the many things he missed because of being late to the game. My heroines are cute, thicc and very attractive. None of them will fall for him overnight. There will be reasons for each of them to fall for him. Be it clichéd or slow building affection. For the level of romance I can write, please read chapters 54-56 of my novel, Summoner: Monster Girl Harem. Many of my readers might agree that is my best mini arc for romance and feelings. This world will engage the reader, as it develops outside of the MC's zone of influence, leading to major changes from what happened in his first life, leading to more dramatic events. My writing quality is top tier, apart from my dyslexia letting me down sometimes. Forgive me, I will usually try to fix them within a few hours after being mentioned! Updates! Some will know I do 1 guaranteed release during the weekdays, then bonus chapters will come on weekends and randomly with support. (Like Sundays where I sometimes post 2-3 extra) I will leave it here, as you can find out the rest while reading the novel. — The Duke

B0mbaCl0ck
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So, i managed to read around 170 chaps and i thought i'd leave a review. The story is good, with well developed world, purpose and depth, with new things being discovered each chapter. The update stability is also good, while the writing quality is decent, with occasional typos or grammar errros, but not too much to be an issue. The MC and Harem have a well developed path of growth, which is clear to follow and well paved. The problem is, the MC himself. He is careless, dense and clueless, who seems incapable of thinking for himself and prioritising. He has a cleear path of growth and a system, but he only uses the system when others remind him or when he remembers it, never truly focused on his goal. The heroines are not that well developed, as once MC has his scene with them, most are forgotten and only receieve casual mentions, with only a couple of them being more present. Some girls get 2-3 scenes, others get 1 during first meeting and then even tho all live in MC's house, are abbandoned and separated from the story. Other main wives also barely receieve any development, and seem to dissapear until casually mentioned by others, with new girls constantly popping up around the MC who never seems to have time for them. The novel is a good read, but the MC and the relationship developments are severely lacking, making it seem more of a Pokemon hunt than anything, with MC only having feelings for 1 or 2 out of 8 or 9... There is always a sense of distance between the MC and his girls, and sometimes i struggle to remember who is who even tho i binged 170 chaps in a few days.

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