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Duke_Asmodeus
Duke_AsmodeusAuthor2yr
2022-12-12 03:11

Your Dukes Shameless Review! This novel is something special for me, started as a simple passion project and seemed very popular with my other readers and new ones. All the things I have learned from Summoner and Vampir were used to create a better world and atmosphere from chapter 1. Also, prepare yourself a dark room with no disturbances when the chapters with [eighteen] appear... Just trust me! My lemons are intense and filled with detail and passion. No one line and poor attempts at them. This novel will be full of emotions, action, and adventure while Zell explores his second life and the many things he missed because of being late to the game. My heroines are cute, thicc and very attractive. None of them will fall for him overnight. There will be reasons for each of them to fall for him. Be it clichéd or slow building affection. For the level of romance I can write, please read chapters 54-56 of my novel, Summoner: Monster Girl Harem. Many of my readers might agree that is my best mini arc for romance and feelings. This world will engage the reader, as it develops outside of the MC's zone of influence, leading to major changes from what happened in his first life, leading to more dramatic events. My writing quality is top tier, apart from my dyslexia letting me down sometimes. Forgive me, I will usually try to fix them within a few hours after being mentioned! Updates! Some will know I do 1 guaranteed release during the weekdays, then bonus chapters will come on weekends and randomly with support. (Like Sundays where I sometimes post 2-3 extra) I will leave it here, as you can find out the rest while reading the novel. — The Duke

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monkyphil
monkyphilLv15

just curious how that works as I've seen it happen a few times recently

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Duke_Asmodeus
Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

Ah, I didnt know what category to use as it's MMO game for a few volumes then full fantasy with only the game system left. Was me, forgive me

monkyphil:just curious how that works as I've seen it happen a few times recently
monkyphil
monkyphilLv15

nah all good just was curious how that worked since a couple other books I read changed suddenly and at that time it mattered because of genre fast passes

Duke_Asmodeus:Ah, I didnt know what category to use as it's MMO game for a few volumes then full fantasy with only the game system left. Was me, forgive me
Duke_Asmodeus
Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

Hmm, sorry deleted your commen by mistake, it showed up several times in my author page.

Duke_Asmodeus:Ah, I didnt know what category to use as it's MMO game for a few volumes then full fantasy with only the game system left. Was me, forgive me
Duke_Asmodeus
Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

Ah! OK I will go back to fantasy if it's better? before going premium I will make a poll so I know which ones you all use!

monkyphil:nah all good just was curious how that worked since a couple other books I read changed suddenly and at that time it mattered because of genre fast passes
monkyphil
monkyphilLv15

I personally don't care since I use coins for your stuff but the others books I had mentioned I don't. and honestly it's 50/50 which fast pass WN gives for daily objective but at least you can buy 1 fantasy FP with points from the store each week

Duke_Asmodeus:Ah! OK I will go back to fantasy if it's better? before going premium I will make a poll so I know which ones you all use!
monkyphil
monkyphilLv15

also the double comment thing happens pretty often

monkyphil:I personally don't care since I use coins for your stuff but the others books I had mentioned I don't. and honestly it's 50/50 which fast pass WN gives for daily objective but at least you can buy 1 fantasy FP with points from the store each week
Duke_Asmodeus
Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

Okay, thanks don't buy stuff from here so didn't know they weren't universal! 😗

monkyphil:I personally don't care since I use coins for your stuff but the others books I had mentioned I don't. and honestly it's 50/50 which fast pass WN gives for daily objective but at least you can buy 1 fantasy FP with points from the store each week
Duke_Asmodeus
Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

Eww, ofc not!

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Ironiap00
Ironiap00Lv1

Is there yuri inside the harem?

Duke_Asmodeus
Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

No

Ironiap00:Is there yuri inside the harem?
shadow_1185
shadow_1185Lv1

Nenhun tipo de yuri ne por que as garotas se beijando quando estão em um trio ou quarteto e yuri muitos autores pensam que isso não é yuri e falam que não tem yuri deixando muito leitores irritados com um yuri indesejado. Desculpa se eu pareci rude e se parece que estou te questionando agressivamente não sou muito bom com as palavras Não precisa responder se não quiser

Duke_Asmodeus:No
Duke_Asmodeus
Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

I don't have any yuri, though.

shadow_1185:Nenhun tipo de yuri ne por que as garotas se beijando quando estão em um trio ou quarteto e yuri muitos autores pensam que isso não é yuri e falam que não tem yuri deixando muito leitores irritados com um yuri indesejado. Desculpa se eu pareci rude e se parece que estou te questionando agressivamente não sou muito bom com as palavras Não precisa responder se não quiser
GodOfDeath1999
GodOfDeath1999Lv15

So if the MC’s master we’re to be killed off because of plot will the MC take care of his wife?

Duke_Asmodeus
Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

Master? This isn't a Chinese novel. There are no masters.

GodOfDeath1999:So if the MC’s master we’re to be killed off because of plot will the MC take care of his wife?
GodOfDeath1999
GodOfDeath1999Lv15

I was talking about Evelyn’s husband.

Duke_Asmodeus:Master? This isn't a Chinese novel. There are no masters.
Duke_Asmodeus
Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

Oh, no, that will never happen. Hasn't Baal suffered enough? He's already a grandad in my head 😆

GodOfDeath1999:I was talking about Evelyn’s husband.
GodOfDeath1999
GodOfDeath1999Lv15

Yes that’s exactly why he needs to go to sleep forever and the MC can have all the female members of the family to himself it’s a win win situation.

Duke_Asmodeus:Oh, no, that will never happen. Hasn't Baal suffered enough? He's already a grandad in my head 😆
Duke_Asmodeus
Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

Haha 😂

GodOfDeath1999:Yes that’s exactly why he needs to go to sleep forever and the MC can have all the female members of the family to himself it’s a win win situation.
GodOfDeath1999
GodOfDeath1999Lv15

Imagine the MC banging all the females in an entire family line it would be a giga chad move I’m sure his master would be fine with it he wants his wife to be happy after all. Just something to think about.

Duke_Asmodeus:Haha 😂
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B0mbaCl0ck
B0mbaCl0ckLv15

So, i managed to read around 170 chaps and i thought i'd leave a review. The story is good, with well developed world, purpose and depth, with new things being discovered each chapter. The update stability is also good, while the writing quality is decent, with occasional typos or grammar errros, but not too much to be an issue. The MC and Harem have a well developed path of growth, which is clear to follow and well paved. The problem is, the MC himself. He is careless, dense and clueless, who seems incapable of thinking for himself and prioritising. He has a cleear path of growth and a system, but he only uses the system when others remind him or when he remembers it, never truly focused on his goal. The heroines are not that well developed, as once MC has his scene with them, most are forgotten and only receieve casual mentions, with only a couple of them being more present. Some girls get 2-3 scenes, others get 1 during first meeting and then even tho all live in MC's house, are abbandoned and separated from the story. Other main wives also barely receieve any development, and seem to dissapear until casually mentioned by others, with new girls constantly popping up around the MC who never seems to have time for them. The novel is a good read, but the MC and the relationship developments are severely lacking, making it seem more of a Pokemon hunt than anything, with MC only having feelings for 1 or 2 out of 8 or 9... There is always a sense of distance between the MC and his girls, and sometimes i struggle to remember who is who even tho i binged 170 chaps in a few days.

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