First and foremost, I am dyslexic, so I use text to speech to listen to Chapters, with that out of the way, here is my review. Writing Quality: So far as I can hear, while listening to the chapter, there are no grammar issues, so five stars for that. (It's quite easy to hear if there are grammar issues.) Stability of Updates: He uploads two chapters a day, and it's stable so far, (Chapter 36) so five stars as well. Story Development: It's the best Naruto fanfiction I've listen to so far, though the story development is slow paste, but never to the degree of being boring, and the main character doesn't become OP, (At this point in the story) at the same time I don't feel like he's a weakling, which is very good, another thing that's good is, though the main character is a sociopath, he is not edgy, (Other than the first time he kills, he's kind of edgy there,) apart from that he's just a battle maniac, oh and the story progression is very good. for story development Five stars. Character Design: he doesn't describe characters very much, but enough to gain a basic picture of what they look like, oh and he describes battle scenes quite well, apart from that there isn't very much else to say. Four stars, World Background: So far as I can tell, he does a excellent job at using what's already there and expanding on it, and it sounds logical to me at least. (what he expands on) Five stars, not much else to say about this subject. Overall Thoughts: A excellent story, definitely worth a read, one of my favorite stories so far, in my top 10 at least, that's it, can't really be bothered to write anything else. (This took me around half an hour to write, don't know if that's long or short, whatever.)

THE best story I've ever rad, hands down a fuc-ing masterpiece, the development is INSANE the attention to detail is INSANE even the pace is absolutely PERFECT, not to mention the comedy in this fic is absolute GOLD I highly suggest anyone to read this masterpiece, don't get turned down by the sociopathic MC because it was done beautifully, I admit I was skeptical that this was another edgy fake sociopath MC before I rad but I genuinely think this is top 3 fanfic material

I rarely ever write reviews and only on The stories that made me feel things this , this hit really close to my ❤️ For new readers the canon ending is till the Chapter named "It was fun while it lasted" or something i forgor the point is reading beyond that will leave a bad taste in yo mouth , Gold comedy , unique and True to it's core charachter design not overly Op but not too Weak , Morally "I DON'T KNOW" section type vut not a straight villain In the end i want you , the new guys to read this good book and not get backtracked like me who read this absolute banger after keeping it for three months in Library

Mc is edgy , a cardboard cutout . Writing quality is good . His whole first kill experience put me off the story , like i "get" it is personal experience or whatever, but those sorts of main characters don't appeal to me , overall pretty good writing but does not do anything for me personally

Author tried to combine dark undertones and comedy, unsurprisingly, it didnt go well.

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Perhaps the author can write better, but even if he can, he doesn't do it, so it often annoys me when I see simple grammar mistakes. When it says murder wizard, I kind of expected him to go independent, but maybe he'll leave the village later. Character is mostly fine, just that I'd prefer he kept being a bit more in control when he has an adrenaline rush. Lowered score mainly cause of the grammar and the decision for him to have loved ones in the story. It's not what I'm expecting when I click to read a story called "a murder wizards adventures".

Its actually genuinly good. Normaly Anime ff are at most entertaining. It shows the Ninja World from a different persepctive which normaly ends in a story turning out quite bad but here the author is masterful enought to make it happen. Do recognize though that the Mc is a very damaged person and that his character is disturbing at times. It does make him fit very well into the Naruto world though. He is almost a perfect fit for it character wise.

Shameless author 5 star review. Honestly i don't really have a plan for this, i just want to write about cool ninja stuff, so you can think of this like a spy novel, there will be a focus on missions, mainly infiltration and some assassination as well as combat. ummm, please be nice? and enjoy of course! :>