Review Detail of HIKARU_GENJI in God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
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So I finished Vol 5. Which in a way is nearly the climax of Book 1 and a great turning point. My story is ambitious. I am gunning for the long term with at least 1k chapters when this end. I started a little slow. I won't lie. Those who read my other story, Son of Hero King, know that I am slow. I take my time to set things up even though I know it might not be the taste for everyone. Is my story good? It isn't ranked #1 so it means that I still have a long way to go. Haha. I usually don't really like saying that you should read X number of chapters to decide whether you will like a story or not. A story should be good from the very start. I believe my story do grab attention from the start but it does suffer from the slow pace sometimes. So, I won't say you should read X number of chapters before deciding if it's good. What I will say is, if you like the story but is worried about the slow pace, then read until the end of Vol 5 to decide for yourself haha. For all those who are reading my story , I am truly happy and thankful and I hope you will be with me for a long time.
God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
HIKARU_GENJI
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please let there be a love relationship between cecilia and adam it doesn't matter if it is later or far ahead but please let there be "He Begs On His Knees"
HIKARU_GENJI:đ I am sorry but I already decided to keep them as mother and Son
AsianAgent:Is this MIDNIGHT PRINCE: Sinful Empire but under a different name? I couldn't find it when I searched for it.
RulerOfAllThings:when does he get powers I like the beginning just a bit boring
Indeed. The story will be more about Underworld/Hunter stuff. But mostly a mix as Adam rise and gain more influence as a criminal
knjkamal24624:did you change name because stroy will focus on underworld more in upcoming volumes
so adam gonna commit many crimes and becoming crazy đ I'm waiting for this arc to finish to being real story. i want to see how you connect other characters in upcoming volumes .
HIKARU_GENJI:Indeed. The story will be more about Underworld/Hunter stuff. But mostly a mix as Adam rise and gain more influence as a criminal
Nah. previous name Midnight Prince was pretty vague. Current title is more in line with what the story going to be mainly about
Re_shin:Are you going to change the subject with the name change?
Dear Author, why did you suddenly change the name?đ I mean although it wasn't that obvious at start but as you further read story title became quite obvious in sense that MC's road is full of sins and so would be his future establishment. But current name is too cringey đ
HIKARU_GENJI:???? This is the first time I changed the name đ . So I don't know what you are talking about
Especially the fact that this mafia boss thing would perhaps be some volume or two of novel(or perhaps a book) and especially it doesn't show supernatural aspect of storyđ
Manmeet_Singh_8886:Dear Author, why did you suddenly change the name?đ I mean although it wasn't that obvious at start but as you further read story title became quite obvious in sense that MC's road is full of sins and so would be his future establishment. But current name is too cringey đ
đI also liked old name but I was interested in seeing if a new name could help and God of Crime is pretty explicit about the future of the story
Manmeet_Singh_8886:Dear Author, why did you suddenly change the name?đ I mean although it wasn't that obvious at start but as you further read story title became quite obvious in sense that MC's road is full of sins and so would be his future establishment. But current name is too cringey đ
in chapter 124 at the end, the author asked the opinion of readers, I donât know if the author will see my comment or not, but Iâll write. I like the development of the story, albeit slowly, but it lays the groundwork, it's better than giving all the information at once, and then we, the readers, will read without waiting. I also like the power that MC has and how he develops it. However, I hope the author makes the MC darker, I personally don't like heroes, and even more so the MC with the hero syndrome, I would prefer the MC to be a neutral/gray person, I hope the author doesn't drag it out too much to adapt to the new world , and MCs will quickly understand that killing is normal, they will understand and be able to accept it without any burden for themselves. History is also called the God of Crime, as a person who is going to follow the underground path, the mafia, to kill and create cruelly and decisively, as it should be. I also hope the author doesn't forget about Sae and the other future women in his harem, I really like Sae's character, I hope she will be throughout the story. Thanks for the story, I hope you continue to write a good story.
