AsianAgent

I think the "she smacked" should be a "he smacked"

What do you mean in the 2nd sentence by "which Alex the most..."?

What do you mean by "the process of souls going into heaven"? How does that relate to angels gaining holy power from souls.

so it can also be faith?

Change "Aled" to "Alex"

Change "eat" to "east"

Change "healthier" to "wealthier"

Obvious mistake at the end of paragraph

What does "à" mean? Is it a mistake?

Wasn't the skill name "Time Distortion"