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Garland
GarlandLv42yr
2023-02-25 14:55

The story is good despite some problems. The main issues that i see are how directionless the story is. After the whole Alabadta thing, it feels like the character is just getting dragged instead of moving the story. His personality also tends to switch from time to time. It had an alright start which good good during Alabasta but after that, i just suddenly lost interest. The MC isn't just that entertaining to read sometimes.

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Andrew_maconha
Andrew_maconhaLv3

Basically a human being

Jorah26252
Jorah26252Lv4

A mentally ill human, yeah

Andrew_maconha:Basically a human being
Jorah26252
Jorah26252Lv4

How are you gonna associate the limited amount of people on twitter with everyone

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Random_exe
Random_exeLv13

That’s just you projecting dude …

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AshburnDz
AshburnDzLv13

bro is braindead

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