webnovel
Anubismark
AnubismarkLv141yr
2023-05-04 23:13

it's written well enough, and there's nothing major inherently wrong, but many of the decisions made when merging the world's of naruto and one piece are just off enough to make it hard to enjoy. for example, the ways it's written makes the mc, hashirama senju, seem less like a si into the body of hashirama, and more like hashirama's grandchild that just happens to be named after him. not necessarily a problem, but the synopsis implied it was a si into the og himself.

In One Piece, as Hashirama Senju

Master4thWall
4.7
168 Chs

Liked by 15 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
HIKARU_GENJI
HIKARU_GENJILv13

I am a fan of Naruto, One piece and I know the author. 3 in 1. Nothing the dislike. The author will not give up on a fic and he has a very stable release rate. He already wrote a OP fic so he has experience with OP and with the new Chapters recently on One Piece making so many revelation I believe he will be able to write an even better fic. good luck mate. But I know you don't need it.

2yr

angel_romero
angel_romeroLv1

Man, it would be so good if the dialogue was better. everyone talks the same. they talk and over explains everything, King Cobra says "guys" like he's not a noble for Christ sakes. its painful to read, the characters should talk like they are separate people with different origins and upbringings, not like clones of each other. if it wasn't for that it would be a great for me.

1yr
Garland
GarlandLv4

The story is good despite some problems. The main issues that i see are how directionless the story is. After the whole Alabadta thing, it feels like the character is just getting dragged instead of moving the story. His personality also tends to switch from time to time. It had an alright start which good good during Alabasta but after that, i just suddenly lost interest. The MC isn't just that entertaining to read sometimes.

1yr
GloriousMilfHunter
GloriousMilfHunterLv4

Everything you need to know about religion, drugs, the internet, threats, dating women (Including sisters), family, friends, animals and many other things. This book will enlighten you on various topics. This is a masterpiece. A gem only held back by the miniscule amount of chapters!

2yr
EvilDarkDemonLord
EvilDarkDemonLordLv4

i didn’t even read this. but i'm giving it a 5 stars, why? because i'm a man with questionable taste's and also because, ITS A STORY FROM MASTER 4TH WALL!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
Melshan
MelshanLv7

HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

1yr
iLoveHaremS2
iLoveHaremS2Lv2

HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

1yr
Cookiecutter56
Cookiecutter56Lv4

Ok ,so the story seems pretty good . I hate harem and overtly consistent sexual chapters . I tried giving this .a chances as I was not able to find 'Non harem' book but The way he acts towards all woman is just scummy and So Cringe , well Good luck I guess

1yr
Noble_K1ng
Noble_K1ngLv4

Hey, Author can you please make the siblings a couple?

1yr
Related Stories

Naruto: Reborn as Orochimaru

"A soul from Earth found itself in the body of a young Orochimaru, equipped with the 'Mad Scientist System'!" From that moment, Orochimaru embarks on the path of scientific research far earlier than anyone could have expected. Groundbreaking achievements quickly follow gene enhancement, genetic modification, cell transplantation, human cloning, bioengineering, and even the creation of a Sharingan army! Jiraiya: 'Why is this guy still tormenting me, even with Sage Mode?!' Tsunade: 'When it comes to a boyfriend, Orochimaru is actually more suitable!' Pain: 'Getting Orochimaru's support is more crucial than capturing the Tailed Beasts!' And when Orochimaru finally revealed himself to the world alongside a boy who could defeat Uchiha Madara using bones, the entire ninja world trembled!" ______________________________________ This is a TL Raw: 火影：我是大蛇丸 Support me on patreon for 45+ Advanced chapters: patreon.com/Blownleaves

Junkdog · Anime & Comics
4.4
167 Chs

Shinigami in the Ninja World

At the age of 12, Naruto Uzumaki gained the extraordinary ability to traverse between his home world, the Ninja World, and the mysterious world known as the Soul Society. Naruto's Diary Konoha Year 63, March 15: I seem to have died [crossed out] I seem to have died and come back to life. Konoha Year 63, March 16: The weight of this new existence crushes him. A return to life offers no solace, and he questions whether it might have been better to remain dead. Konoha Year 63, April 1: Desperation sets in as Naruto searches the Soul Society for his parents, only to discover that this world is not connected to his own. His parents are nowhere to be found. Konoha Year 63, July: The dream of becoming Hokage fades, as Naruto finds himself detached from the village that once held his heart. The desire to become a Shinigami grows stronger within him, spurred by the hope of discovering the true Soul Society of his world and reuniting with his parents. ... Patreon.com/Bleam — 120 Advance Chapters!

Bleam · Anime & Comics
4.8
205 Chs

Spider-Man 0X

Alex Wilson was reborn in the Marvel world as a regular civilian, without any special power. He was living away from the bustling city where villains mostly lurked around. But his luck eventually ran out like all those humans who die all the time thanks to those supervillains and Heroes' fights. He got caught up in a fight between Hulk and Abomination, when he went to the city to buy some supplies and meet his father who was living in the city, resulting in a spinal cord injury. But thanks to the lunatic doctors who performed various tests on him, he found out he had a perfect immunity mutation. But excessive tests killed him in the end. Once again he woke up in a new body... Peter Parker's body. Now, he has a second chance and power to tilt the balance of power. Follow this journey as he goes on a revenge rampage and tries his best to make the most out of Peter's intellect and luck with girls. A selfish hero is what he plans to become who will put his own happiness before others and live his life his own way. But do things always go as planned? --- MC kills villains without any mercy. --- I don't own anything related to Marvel except for my OC --- Cover picture found on Pinterest --- Support Link:- https://www.patreon.com/XcaliburXc [Read over 20+ advance chapters] --- I am also posting this on Scribblehub, Royal Road and Fanfiction sites. Do not translate or post my work anywhere.

Xcalibur_Xc · Anime & Comics
4.7
214 Chs

Looking Forward to Another World

[Dimensional Magic Cube's Instructions] [1. The Dimensional Magic Cube can automatically absorb the energy that exists in the dimension. Once a month, it can randomly open a dimensional channel and perform dimensional travel.] [2. The Dimensional Magic Cube has the ability to convert various powers from different dimensions, ready to be activated and used at any time.] [3. There is a storage space inside the Dimensional Magic Cube, which can be opened and used at any time.] [4. ...] This is the story of a man who once couldn't choose his own future but vowed to live for himself in this new life. Carrying the Dimensional Magic Cube, Riezel arrived in the world of swords and magic and wandered through different worlds, hoping to find a new beginning. === In a nutshell, a story about a man from Earth who got transmigrated into a fantasy world (original world that act as the main world) and has the ability to travel to various anime worlds to become stronger. Visited Worlds: 1. Danmachi (Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon?) 2. Demon Slayer (Kimetsu no Yaiba) 3. ... === This is a translation. I'm translating as I read and making some modifications to the story if needed. Author: Ruqing Rusu Original: https://book.qidian.com/info/1035015624 === Support and read advanced chapters at: patreon.com/VALRRR

VALRRR · Anime & Comics
4.5
268 Chs

Danmachi: I Have A Type-Moon Gacha System!

Transmigrated into the world of "Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon?" in the body of the protagonist, Bell Cranel, I suddenly found myself with the 'Type-Moon System.' This system lets me trade the money I earn for powerful items, skills, and magic. Starting out as a low-key adventurer, I began exploring this new world. But as it turns out, I’ve been unintentionally winning the hearts of countless beauties around me. Have I messed up somehow? Doesn't seem like it! ........................................................................................................................................................ #Mc is thoughtful and cunning! #No forced relationship #Update schedule will be 7 chapters a week. Read 20 chapters ahead on my patreon: https://patreon.com/heavenlydawn

heavenlydawn_ · Anime & Comics
4.7
61 Chs
Login