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CephJester
CephJesterLv22yr
2022-11-25 06:36

Loving the story so far, especially from this perspective from Ironwood. It truly feels like a combination of his original character and a third party. But, onto the reviews! - The writing quality is top-notch, and easily provokes you to keep on reading through the story. - Stability of updates is also quite good. 19 chapters within seven days? That's absolutely amazing! - Story development is equally as good. The characters are younger, and many of them feel similar to how they were in volume 1, before they faced the reality of the world, and the story progresses at a good pace. - Character design and world background sort of merge, which is a nice detail. Characters all fit into their spots around the lore of Remnant, and each fits with their character. The main characters have not changed too far from their originals, albeit with small changes with the core characters, such as the Schnees. Overall, easily a 5/5.

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CephJester
CephJesterLv2

I also still hate we can't create points and empty lines when we type. I do that to try and sort out my reviews, but it just... Collapses it into one giant mess of a paragraph.

BaaSheep123
BaaSheep123Lv6

Webnovel be like: "go use our mobile app." (Which I actually have been using exclusively for the past 3 years) But yeah, it's stupid how the PC version doesn't even have basic paragraphing or text functions.

CephJester:I also still hate we can't create points and empty lines when we type. I do that to try and sort out my reviews, but it just... Collapses it into one giant mess of a paragraph.
ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

Or when on mobile you use autocorre and it adds a random space in the middle of the word and behind the letters it added ct

BaaSheep123:Webnovel be like: "go use our mobile app." (Which I actually have been using exclusively for the past 3 years) But yeah, it's stupid how the PC version doesn't even have basic paragraphing or text functions.
BaaSheep123
BaaSheep123Lv6

I don't think I've ever had this problem you are describing. Interesting though. Have you checked if its not just your phone/autocorrect itself?

ThanatosGreekGod:Or when on mobile you use autocorre and it adds a random space in the middle of the word and behind the letters it added ct
ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

Oh really? No it’s only this app Heres what happens: You can’ t It’s so weird and annoying

BaaSheep123:I don't think I've ever had this problem you are describing. Interesting though. Have you checked if its not just your phone/autocorrect itself?
BaaSheep123
BaaSheep123Lv6

Yeah, I've never experienced this problem in my three years of using this app lol.

ThanatosGreekGod:Oh really? No it’s only this app Heres what happens: You can’ t It’s so weird and annoying
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