As someone who has long abandoned RWBY and isn't a fan of even its fanfics, i am pretty intetersted in this story. An oc self inserted as Ironwood is very rare and the way how he does it is pretty good.

i found a jewel here .............................................................................................................................

Reveal spoiler

OC X GLYNDA! .,.,.,...,..,.,,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,,.,.,..,,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,,,,,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.

love it great character interactions

Tons of little grammatical mistakes, but what can I expect from fanfiction these days. Everything else is pretty good. ...................

it's a whole different outtake on an RWBY story not an insanity op bot on his way to becoming strong. i like that it show more of the bigger picture

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un diseño unico para un protagonista, en ves de empezar de cero como uno nuevo, esta mas orientado en hacer que uno ya echo de desarrolle en otra direccion