Hey, it's Jhaydun here! Just shamelessly reviewing my novel. I do love this story, and understand it's not for everyone. Please let me know what mistakes I make and how I could improve my story, because I will take everyone's suggestions into consideration. Thank you for the lovely support I've received so far. Gerard and I both appreciate it! ✨✨

So with most of my reviews I like to start with my critics and I only critic novels I think are worth saving. I'd like too know a little more about the world, though I think the pacing of information is coming in at a steady rate. So my one and only critic is over, now for the praise. I normally never read webnovels past the 5th chapter and even then that sometimes is a struggle, but not this one I read about 15 chapters in one sitting without wanting to turn away. Though yes it's not the most inventive system/reincarnation novel it does a great job of flowing. Stuctured very nicely, I'd say it is better than the mass majority of novels I've read on this app. The MC Gerard is great being an older man is refreshing as the way he moves just breaths that level of a seasoned individual. And even though I am 15 chapters deep and nothing crazy has happened i can see the ground worked being laid, the foundations of Rome slowly coming up to a crescendo that I whole heartedly believe will culminate in an excellent story keep up the work, and don't let these haters knock you off the path you are going on!

Keeps you wanting more, great detail and brilliant topic

This only really had anything to do with the undead in the beginning but now it’s just a cliche adventure,dungeon exploration fantasy novel. With the MC being human again after all and not wanting to be evil or whatever. It’s not a bad novel I just expected something else and was left disappointed.

The thing this novel suffers most is it’s: (1) lack of identity and (2) lack of direction. It first starts out as him being undead, but then the novel turns complete to him being a human being in a tradition adventure/dungeon story? There are no real stakes. The fact that classes are restricting a person from using items? And then I’m like, okay, he’s human now…. What’s next? The author fails to tell us. I just feel bored. And it started out interesting… but more and more I am losing interest.

Wooww I have to say it's not like any other story I've read before the plot is very unique and the main protagonist isn't what I was expecting but that's what keeps it interesting nice job

Hmmm.. Okay From the very first page, it was clear that the author had a firm grip on the English language. The grammar was impeccable, which made for a smooth and easy reading experience. The updates were timely, and it was obvious that the author took great care in ensuring that the story flowed seamlessly. Once I delved into the story, I was immediately transported into the world that the author had created. The immersive storytelling style made it easy to become invested in the characters and their journey. Although the beginning was detailed, I appreciated how the author took the time to set the stage for the rest of the story. As I continued reading, I found myself becoming more and more invested in the characters. They were realistic and relatable, which made it easy to understand their motivations and decisions. The author did an excellent job of making their struggles feel authentic and tangible. Overall, I highly recommend this novel. The grammar was on point, the updates were good, and the story was incredibly immersive. Once you push past the beginning, you'll be rewarded with a story that is both realistic and understandable. Kudos to the author for crafting such a memorable tale!

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A fantastic book, with its only drawback is locking chapters beyond 50 behind a pay wall

Solid 5 stars! One of the best reads I've had on Webnovel. It just sucked me right in. Nice amounts of action alternates between dark and lighthearted. Overall my only disappointment was when I ran out of chapter. Good job Author. 👍