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Salman_Khan_3166
Salman_Khan_3166Lv43mth
2024-09-29 21:45

I will only say that the idea is great of having doomsday but the mc is just i donot even have words. read at your own behalf . Only the story and idea was great but the because of mc the whole story became worse then trash. The whole story is him saying that he is moral he will use his powers responsibly . He has power to destroy earth and he works as a bodyguard. And it was said it was harem but it looked more like gay or yaoi.

The Ultimate Doomsday (Marvel/DC)

Rex_Zatch
2.7
102 Chs

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ScottyTheD
ScottyTheDLv5

This is basically unreadable, my suggestion is for the author to get an English editor. But until this story is HEAVILY EDITED, don't waste your time.

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PABELO
PABELOLv4

I don't care that he is a 5D (Pentadimensional) being, but being a lab rat is already the end of the line for me. I don't want to see someone being a lab rat for experiments just for knowledge

2yr
Taragorm
TaragormLv1

Aweful even if it was translated to perfection it's written like a elementary school book e.g Tony is smart.. Leon did this... Etc. No dialogue no real descriptive writing just summary writing which I hate at how common it is on webnovel.

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Jossez
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I read the first three chapters and I can't take it anymore, it repeats "Leon creed" all the time, So much so that it's annoying and makes it impossible to read

1yr
Ikaru5
Ikaru5Lv4

Seriously it is written as if someone is telling you about a FanFiction he/she has been reading rather than you reading a FanFiction! MC did this, MC did that, and so one it is just a list of recounting events like a shopping list.

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TheFoolishAkuma
TheFoolishAkumaLv14

The story gets better over time as does the writing quality, The character is powerful which I like and he has a goal that is revealed later on. personally I think it's a good one with potential for omniversal story coverage..........

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Ugay123
Ugay123Lv4

I read the original version and even tho it had a hint of chinese it was still one of my favorite ff i read so if the author can correct some small mistakes like repeating the name every few words it can be a very good fanfic

1yr
Love_C_raft
Love_C_raftLv14

if you could re-edit and re-translate and take out some Chinese factors than it would be rough polish gem but there are different things that would gave to take out such as mc personality and dialog to be much more bearable and natural, and I hope you can make it's potential shine, good luck.

1yr
hol_low
hol_lowLv14

what's wrong with people giving out negative energy. ignore all of them 馃槫

1yr
HOLY_BOB
HOLY_BOBLv4

ITS TRASH. and im not talking about writing quality. The story in itself is trash.

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