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PABELO
PABELOLv42yr
2023-01-04 21:53

I don't care that he is a 5D (Pentadimensional) being, but being a lab rat is already the end of the line for me. I don't want to see someone being a lab rat for experiments just for knowledge

The Ultimate Doomsday (Marvel/DC)

Rex_Zatch
2.7
102 Chs

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The_Eldritch_Troll
The_Eldritch_TrollLv4

Hes just copied and pasted a Chinese MTL and changed the name of the character from Lu Yuan to Leon Creed. He also changed the summary by a word or two but other than that it is word for word the same thing. By the end of this fic, he will have the same number of chapters and words (if you exclude the disclaimers he copies and pasts on each chapter.) Word Count: 861.4K. Chapter count: 634

1yr
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Daenerys_Targarye
Daenerys_TargaryeLv14

What’ the name off the mlt

The_Eldritch_Troll:Hes just copied and pasted a Chinese MTL and changed the name of the character from Lu Yuan to Leon Creed. He also changed the summary by a word or two but other than that it is word for word the same thing. By the end of this fic, he will have the same number of chapters and words (if you exclude the disclaimers he copies and pasts on each chapter.) Word Count: 861.4K. Chapter count: 634
1yr
1
Arcguile_Renzig
Arcguile_RenzigLv14

That's why the story seems familiar. I think I read this before when I could still handle chinese MTL novels.

The_Eldritch_Troll:Hes just copied and pasted a Chinese MTL and changed the name of the character from Lu Yuan to Leon Creed. He also changed the summary by a word or two but other than that it is word for word the same thing. By the end of this fic, he will have the same number of chapters and words (if you exclude the disclaimers he copies and pasts on each chapter.) Word Count: 861.4K. Chapter count: 634
1yr
1
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ScottyTheD
ScottyTheDLv5

This is basically unreadable, my suggestion is for the author to get an English editor. But until this story is HEAVILY EDITED, don't waste your time.

2yr

Taragorm
TaragormLv1

Aweful even if it was translated to perfection it's written like a elementary school book e.g Tony is smart.. Leon did this... Etc. No dialogue no real descriptive writing just summary writing which I hate at how common it is on webnovel.

2yr
Jossez
JossezLv1

I read the first three chapters and I can't take it anymore, it repeats "Leon creed" all the time, So much so that it's annoying and makes it impossible to read

1yr
Ikaru5
Ikaru5Lv4

Seriously it is written as if someone is telling you about a FanFiction he/she has been reading rather than you reading a FanFiction! MC did this, MC did that, and so one it is just a list of recounting events like a shopping list.

1yr
TheFoolishAkuma
TheFoolishAkumaLv14

The story gets better over time as does the writing quality, The character is powerful which I like and he has a goal that is revealed later on. personally I think it's a good one with potential for omniversal story coverage..........

1yr
Ugay123
Ugay123Lv4

I read the original version and even tho it had a hint of chinese it was still one of my favorite ff i read so if the author can correct some small mistakes like repeating the name every few words it can be a very good fanfic

1yr
Love_C_raft
Love_C_raftLv14

if you could re-edit and re-translate and take out some Chinese factors than it would be rough polish gem but there are different things that would gave to take out such as mc personality and dialog to be much more bearable and natural, and I hope you can make it's potential shine, good luck.

1yr
hol_low
hol_lowLv14

what's wrong with people giving out negative energy. ignore all of them 😤

1yr
HOLY_BOB
HOLY_BOBLv4

ITS TRASH. and im not talking about writing quality. The story in itself is trash.

1yr
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