This is basically unreadable, my suggestion is for the author to get an English editor. But until this story is HEAVILY EDITED, don't waste your time.

I don't care that he is a 5D (Pentadimensional) being, but being a lab rat is already the end of the line for me. I don't want to see someone being a lab rat for experiments just for knowledge

Aweful even if it was translated to perfection it's written like a elementary school book e.g Tony is smart.. Leon did this... Etc. No dialogue no real descriptive writing just summary writing which I hate at how common it is on webnovel.

I read the first three chapters and I can't take it anymore, it repeats "Leon creed" all the time, So much so that it's annoying and makes it impossible to read

The story gets better over time as does the writing quality, The character is powerful which I like and he has a goal that is revealed later on. personally I think it's a good one with potential for omniversal story coverage..........

I read the original version and even tho it had a hint of chinese it was still one of my favorite ff i read so if the author can correct some small mistakes like repeating the name every few words it can be a very good fanfic

if you could re-edit and re-translate and take out some Chinese factors than it would be rough polish gem but there are different things that would gave to take out such as mc personality and dialog to be much more bearable and natural, and I hope you can make it's potential shine, good luck.

what's wrong with people giving out negative energy. ignore all of them 😤

ITS TRASH. and im not talking about writing quality. The story in itself is trash.