i really like the Grimmjow his design just so cool, i've really got nothing to criticize beside short chapter. anyway story is itself is good, i really like mc attitude although he's clueless about solo leveling he is able to calm down and set his priorities right at the moment.
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LIKEtsk. You giving me too much work. But I have a plan for the book. Like what is he gonna be, how's he gonna change some things and so forth. Uhhh My MC wont be dumb, but he won't be smart. He'll think shit out before he does them. No harem is a must. Enjoy the read :D
Leon_Luis_:a description please.. i need to know what is going on before jumping into a fic. what i don't want - Dumb Mc , Harem , forced plot(romance or just plot in general) what i want - Normal or Smart Mc , No harem , smooth plot(like you have a plan while writing, not just the start) Don't care about - grammer , mc's looks , character's detailed descriptions(their looks and what they are wearing).
a description please.. i need to know what is going on before jumping into a fic. what i don't want - Dumb Mc , Harem , forced plot(romance or just plot in general) what i want - Normal or Smart Mc , No harem , smooth plot(like you have a plan while writing, not just the start) Don't care about - grammer , mc's looks , character's detailed descriptions(their looks and what they are wearing).
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