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Ohhh 😧🙀 Thank you 🥳🥳💯😎🙌🏽🎉😅

The fact is, this book is something I started to test myself and properly understand myself as a writer, so neither the world building, story progression and power system are as fleshed out as they ought to be because at the start I was just treading in complete darkness in an attempt to where my writing led me. The book isn't great, but I put effort into it and will continue to do so and very hopefully, complete it. Apologies for the bad reading experience, it's a first time writing attempt. And like with most other people; I didn't realize how bad I was before, but, it'll get better. anyways, have a great day and thanks for the review

Disagree, 👎🏽😑 I'm not a trash author, and I didn't give up. Rather, I'm trying to actually do the work now and set a proper, explainable power system in place for multiple classes because I probably won't time to do so in future once I continue writing, which is why I've paused for so long. The second is pretty evident, I went ahead to read both LOTM and RI as a matter of course in bettering myself as an author, it took longer than expected, but you should expect higher (decent) quality writing from here on out

Firstly. I think my thoughts at the time were a bit linear as I drawing upon other novels for inspiration. But also, you can chock it up to Ezra being unreasonably fearful since he has almost zero acquiesce in political matters. Because if he did. he wouldn't have died in the matter he did. Anyways, if you reach the 300's, tell me what you think about the novels progression

Yes. But it's far far down the line

Somewhat? Long for much of the story of the latest chapter, but there will inevitably be progress on that part

Yooo. Were you later able to read it? or did you ultimately give up?

okay 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

As for a rewrite, that will probably only happen once the book is completed 😔

The fillers are cut down to dwindling numbers the further you go, but I do apologize for not providing better reading experience