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Review Detail of Unsightly in In Marvel, I Am God.

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Unsightly
UnsightlyAuthor1yrUnsightly

As I said, this is not my fanfic. But I believe this is one of the better ones out there. No blatant racism. No pointless harem. MC is not scared to kill.

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In Marvel, I Am God.

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Valorant_343
Valorant_343Lv13Valorant_343

cant find this on MTL, what is the original name?

xlvlx
xlvlxLv4xlvlx

Does the mc help the ”good” guys the whole fanfic, or will he go his seperate way?

Unsightly
UnsightlyAuthorUnsightly

Separate way for sure. He is all about "Mutant Kind"

xlvlx:Does the mc help the ”good” guys the whole fanfic, or will he go his seperate way?
Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv15Gh0st00

honestly the translation is bad you're not making a huge mistakes like he or she or wrong names use except for a few times it's just it's not properly translated from whatever language it was in to the English language cuz a lot of the words used do not make sense

Unsightly
UnsightlyAuthorUnsightly

It is an mtl

Gh0st00:honestly the translation is bad you're not making a huge mistakes like he or she or wrong names use except for a few times it's just it's not properly translated from whatever language it was in to the English language cuz a lot of the words used do not make sense
Blinking_Apollyon
Blinking_ApollyonLv1Blinking_Apollyon

The stop copy pasting and try to make it a little bit better! I don't think saying 'It's an mtl' will make up for the grammar! It's in your best interest to make it more readable and for us readers to reward you by giving you power stones. No way it's gonna work otherwise.

Unsightly:It is an mtl
Blinking_Apollyon
Blinking_ApollyonLv1Blinking_Apollyon

You can start by editing your work, that will separate you from the other mtl 'copy paste' authors in this site. Otherwise, many many people are going to skip this book once they see it's a translated one.

Blinking_Apollyon:The stop copy pasting and try to make it a little bit better! I don't think saying 'It's an mtl' will make up for the grammar! It's in your best interest to make it more readable and for us readers to reward you by giving you power stones. No way it's gonna work otherwise.
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shashank_bhatt
shashank_bhattLv13shashank_bhatt

You said no pointless harem so is their romance?

Unsightly:Separate way for sure. He is all about "Mutant Kind"
Unsightly
UnsightlyAuthorUnsightly

No, not as 140 chapters really

shashank_bhatt:You said no pointless harem so is their romance?
Raimundo_Brandao
Raimundo_BrandaoLv1Raimundo_Brandao

Como e o nome da autor original? que eu quero continuar lendo

Unsightly
UnsightlyAuthorUnsightly

The original author is in china, it is very hard to find them

Raimundo_Brandao:Como e o nome da autor original? que eu quero continuar lendo
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5PsyLoRD

+1

Raimundo_Brandao:Como e o nome da autor original? que eu quero continuar lendo
Raimundo_Brandao
Raimundo_BrandaoLv1Raimundo_Brandao

Obrigado😊

Unsightly:The original author is in china, it is very hard to find them
killersoul
killersoulLv13killersoul

but it's not his work that's what they're trying to say

Blinking_Apollyon:You can start by editing your work, that will separate you from the other mtl 'copy paste' authors in this site. Otherwise, many many people are going to skip this book once they see it's a translated one.
tt_g
tt_gLv4tt_g

If the author doesn't speak English, it's basically impossible to insure there's proper grammar. He's probably not even getting paid, and this is one of the better translations in my opinion. I feel that you're being way too entitled.

Blinking_Apollyon:You can start by editing your work, that will separate you from the other mtl 'copy paste' authors in this site. Otherwise, many many people are going to skip this book once they see it's a translated one.
Blinking_Apollyon
Blinking_ApollyonLv1Blinking_Apollyon

Look, all I asked is for editing, nothing more, otherwise a lot of people, like me, who are getting tired of seeing good chinese fanfics with bad translations and just dropping them after the second chapter. I don't think it's entitled to ask for something an author is supposed to give to his readers, a readable content.

tt_g:If the author doesn't speak English, it's basically impossible to insure there's proper grammar. He's probably not even getting paid, and this is one of the better translations in my opinion. I feel that you're being way too entitled.
Absolute_Qlipoth
Absolute_QlipothLv3Absolute_Qlipoth

true

tt_g:If the author doesn't speak English, it's basically impossible to insure there's proper grammar. He's probably not even getting paid, and this is one of the better translations in my opinion. I feel that you're being way too entitled.
Awesome22
Awesome22Lv11Awesome22

He can do whatever he wants, nobody is paying him to translate this.

Blinking_Apollyon:Look, all I asked is for editing, nothing more, otherwise a lot of people, like me, who are getting tired of seeing good chinese fanfics with bad translations and just dropping them after the second chapter. I don't think it's entitled to ask for something an author is supposed to give to his readers, a readable content.
Blinking_Apollyon
Blinking_ApollyonLv1Blinking_Apollyon

And good for him. But, if he wants a lot of readers, he has to make the book readable. For me, I am not comfortable reading a book with barely readable grammar.

Awesome22:He can do whatever he wants, nobody is paying him to translate this.
IOnlyEatDinner
IOnlyEatDinnerLv5IOnlyEatDinner

No blatant racism but you can see with the megalomaniac MC that he doesn't really care about any place other than China. Unfortunately, a lot of Chinese fanfic that involves american comics suffer from this.

arata_red
arata_redLv2arata_red

as the uploader and translator you should change the MC's name from ''endless" to something common english name like "jake/john/billy".