Item: Necromancer Of The Shadows
Rating: 3.2
Author: coldog22

coldog22Lv151yr

2023-05-26 09:27

I can't get past the grammer issues and repetitive sentences. Multiple paragraphs in the same chapter contradict themselves. The story may have had potential, but I can't continue this to find out.

Necromancer Of The Shadows

Zero_writer

4.3

1300 Chs

Liked by 10 people

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Zero_writerAuthor

Thanks for taking the time to write a review. I know the grammar is not good, especially in the starting chapters. I will soon rewrite the starting chapters, it is just getting delayed because of some reasons.

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coldog22Lv15

If/When you do, please comment on here again. I'll go back and read from the beginning. If it's improved enough to get me hooked, I'll update my review.

Zero_writer:Thanks for taking the time to write a review. I know the grammar is not good, especially in the starting chapters. I will soon rewrite the starting chapters, it is just getting delayed because of some reasons.
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