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T_Tan
T_TanLv41yr
2023-03-20 01:02

I only read up to chapter 11. In my opinion this novel have potential, not bad. But i don't like the story because author use 3rd person perspective, just try to count how many times author write "Evan" in a single chapter, personally i don't feel connected to the story because of this. Also i feel like author need to use more punctuation, i notice author rarely use coma (,) sign on his story which made the paragraf feel chaotic. I also don't like how author do chapter 1, the sacrifice part on chapter 1 is unnecessary for me, and its better if you put it in chapter 10. In my opinion you made chapter 2 to chapter 9 as a flashback is a bad choice. I mean why would you give readers an 8 chapter long flashback right from the start? its unnecessary, everyone can literally read chapter 1 and jump to chapter 10 immediately and can still understand the story. Its a bad start in my opinion. You should know that you need to make the story as interesting as possible on early chapter to make people stay and hyped for the next chapters, but here i am dropping on chapter 11 before even i know mc new power after the sacrifice. I hope my review can help you to get better. good luck author.

Necromancer Of The Shadows

Zero_writer
4.3
1323 Chs

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Zero_writer
Zero_writerAuthor

Thank you for your review. I will try to improve the things that you pointed out.

1yr
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Strawberryhouse
StrawberryhouseLv4

Can you leave a review on my novel? Nobody has given me feedback on where I can improve. [img=Speechless]

1yr
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bramadingo
bramadingoLv13

Guess who is skipping those chapters

1yr
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Subhendu_Gayen
Subhendu_GayenLv4

You're too impatient.

7mth
DemonKingDiablo
DemonKingDiabloLv14

man you need have some patient

1mth
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Zero_writer
Zero_writerAuthor

Hey guys author here, I don't have much experience in writing so if you have any suggestions or questions please let me know. Thanks for reading.

2yr

Leviathan04
Leviathan04Lv15

The only bad thing I have to say about his novels is that I’ve caught up to the current updates and can’t read more :( the author did a great job with the character, the world background and the set up for down the road. Some authors talk about the higher powers or gods but 600 chpts in you still haven’t seen anything that hey talked about earlier. This author has not done that, everything that’s way stronger than the MC is vague and uncertain and that something I really like :) keep up the great work! I’m looking forward to many more chapters :)

1yr
Khosravi_82
Khosravi_82Lv3

Excellent, the first few chapters were a little Mid, but after that it became awesome. Some arcs seems to be a little but longer than it should be, but I think it's because I'm following the story with Daily release. And the Arc wich he gets his class is phenomenal... Thank you author and pls keep up the good work

1yr
Deve_Julien
Deve_JulienLv3

It's not bad but after 130 chapters we still don't know why the title include "necromancer" I suppose it's his future class but author spoiled it too early.

1yr
Volk_tok
Volk_tokLv2

More chapters 💥💥💥 More chapters 💥💥💥 More chapters 💥💥💥

2yr
Pumpkin_King10
Pumpkin_King10Lv15

honestly it's not a bad novel but I'm more displeased with the fact that it's got the word necromancer in the title but it's had nothing to do with minions or rasing anything to do his bidding and I'm at chapter 110. plus the book goes premium at around chapter 45 honestly a waste of a read from my point of view but the story's not bad if you like this kind of novel that is.

1yr
Edward_Endemano
Edward_EndemanoLv14

I just finished volume 1 and there hasn’t been any mention of necromancy. Given that it is in the title, I feel like it is false advertising. At best, the pacing and development is very slow.

1yr
coldog22
coldog22Lv15

I can't get past the grammer issues and repetitive sentences. Multiple paragraphs in the same chapter contradict themselves. The story may have had potential, but I can't continue this to find out.

1yr
CosmicMonarch
CosmicMonarchLv10

I gave it a try after reading comments below...and I completed more than 240 chapter...God, it's super slow paced...Unnecessary Tournament arc for more than 70 chapters. Author tried to squeeze and stretch the story in every aspect that he could... I read so many novels and this one made top list for being slow paced and awfully dragging MC's power level up and creating problems for his level ups. And none of u can understand my frustration until u read the story. But hey, it's my opinion and it should not cloud your anticipation to read go awry...

1yr
Akadreamer87
Akadreamer87Lv1

I like the story so far. Story development is good. Keep updating

2yr
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