coldog22

I'm not a fan of her submissive attitude here. She could have just walked away. She had no need to follow him. He is neither her superior nor can he order her to spar.

ber -> her

No, he's a mortal immortal immortal mortal.

Overlord, but not as cheesy. This story has immense potential.

Huh?

This doesn't make sense. If half the value of a silver coin can only get you a small loaf of bread, then the value of a silver coin should only get two small loads of bread. This isn't enough for a small family to live off of.

Great read! This is one worth paying to read ahead for.

This story starts out great, lots of new ideas that I haven't seen before. however, around chapter 210, it becomes incredibly racist against Americans, constantly saying that Americans are calling chinnese people "Yellow Monkeys." They portray any other country but China in a bad light.

Yall must have never heard of Hollywood, or Hervey Weinstien.