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Drako_0692
Drako_0692Lv11yr
2023-06-04 01:17

The beginning is quite slow and there are many modifications to luffy that do not quite stick and nami has never been one of my favorites as a love interest. Other than that, it's a great story, canonical personalities, good comedy, realistic dreams, and a good personality and charisma.

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Fallen_Crown
4.7

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Fallen_Crown
Fallen_CrownAuthor

Thanks for the honest feedback. Appreciate it.

1yr
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Robert_Rogue
Robert_RogueLv4

author San who is the love interest(s)?

Fallen_Crown:Thanks for the honest feedback. Appreciate it.
1yr
DarkCreation101
DarkCreation101Lv4

Nami fr be the kinda girl to only get with you for your money...

Fallen_Crown:Thanks for the honest feedback. Appreciate it.
1yr
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TheArzaBoy
TheArzaBoyLv1

Esto es simplemente GOD, no me habia sentido tan emocionado leyendo un libro desde Reborn a Enel, Bro si puedes Terminarlo a tu propio ritmo por que yo seguirle leyendolo. (Ya es como la 4 vez que lo vuelvo a releerlo).

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Saad_Ur_Rahman
Saad_Ur_RahmanLv4

alright am 345 chapters in , you love one piece ? read this , the au is strong , you are in good hands with this author

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Zaelum
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WolfLord
WolfLordLv14

very interesting and enjoyable read still embracing the Luffy character while also making it his own version one criticism is the chapters are a bit short but the writer makes up with that by releasing 2 a day I really recommend people read this is a very good read

1yr
White_Clown
White_ClownLv14

since this is ‘Real Life’ difficulty, will his crew also change? we cannot sure that he'll sail and meet other characters precisely similar with original based level selected. Also, will he form a gang that will become member in Goa Kingdom (like Grey Terminal's kid, original character)? also normally, someone won't using small boat like Luffy did especially guy who cannot swim.

2yr
i_dont_know_if_he
i_dont_know_if_heLv4

Just for the fact that you gave "Whitebeard" an actual White Beard, five stars. Bravo...

1yr
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Nami is first .who will be next.Robin.?maybe Vivi.?.I hope MC will have a lover later one

1yr
BurgerNight
BurgerNightLv4

The grammar is on point, and there are rarely mistakes, and even then, nothing major. The only thing I can't stand is the slow pace. I am at chapter 26 and the MC hasn't even started his journey but is still training on Dawn island. Boring af

1yr
NoneAbove
NoneAboveLv4

what happened book it disappears or something ? I just opened it gone somewhere ? (10:23 am)Date: sat,8, june for me

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Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Are thare Lemons.?.Is this a Harem.?.I wana ask.since Most One Piece FF have it.

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