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i_dont_know_if_he
i_dont_know_if_heLv42yr
2022-12-14 22:19

Just for the fact that you gave "Whitebeard" an actual White Beard, five stars. Bravo...

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Fallen_Crown
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Fallen_Crown
Fallen_CrownAuthor

Thanks man!!!

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TheUltimateP1e
TheUltimateP1eLv4

he actually has one tho? Whitebeards beard is an actual beard in anime and manga. Rogers "Beard" though is just his nose hair

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i_dont_know_if_he
i_dont_know_if_heLv4

I'm asking you. Does this look like a beast to you or is it actually a mustache?

TheUltimateP1e:he actually has one tho? Whitebeards beard is an actual beard in anime and manga. Rogers "Beard" though is just his nose hair
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TheUltimateP1e
TheUltimateP1eLv4

thats a real insult to one of the best characters in extence rn

i_dont_know_if_he:I'm asking you. Does this look like a beast to you or is it actually a mustache?
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Supreme_1_Raushan
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brother do you really left the novel writting 😔😔 I can see that all your books are deleted plz come by I need you.. No we need you .. for everyone that you wrote these chapters day or night no matter.. I know it's already 2-3 years but plz come back

Fallen_Crown:Thanks man!!!
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