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Blast_Niro
Blast_NiroLv41yr
2022-12-21 04:27

I honestly was expecting more from this but is was average at best, when I saw the Yu picture and the synopsis I was actually gased but after reading the chapters I was disappointed, the chapters were practically the same just repeating how great the mc is how his relationship with the angels and god are improving without any details and somehow the mc became the second most worshiped person in heaven after god, yeah the mc is a total mary sue and the writing is sub-par at best as the paragraphs keep repeating themselves and the characters 2D as they can be. Overall not great work but good for a quick read .

DxD: King of Salt

Lust_Demon_Samael
4.3
58 Chs

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Pxzmen
PxzmenLv1

wew everyone have different opinion and this just not your cup of tea

1yr
3
81MrX
81MrXLv1

Of course he is a Gary Sue, he is a pure hearted Christian, just not on the extreme ends of it. 😆⛪✝️👼

1yr
3
SolemnFox
SolemnFoxLv4

I agree all the reviews hyped this up but it was disappointing.

1yr
6
Salmon_El_Solomon
Salmon_El_SolomonLv3

You forget, the mc has no personality, it's stupid to make a mc who follow like a dog to someone.

1yr
20
Black_Fairestorm
Black_FairestormLv1

You are stupid

1mth
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TruTatsuya
TruTatsuyaLv3

Who are the Harem members? I would prefer no harem but your most likely going to continue with harem considering it's dxd.

1yr

DASeraphicus
DASeraphicusLv14

I love it already, can you please not drop it

1yr
Sword_1mmortal
Sword_1mmortalLv14

I, who is about to awaken, am the Weeabo Dragon who has stolen the Principle of Degeneracy from God I laugh at the “Vanilla’s” And grieve at the “NTR’s” I shall become the Otaku Dragon of Degeneracy and I shall sink you To the depths of the Filthy Degenerate Culture

1yr
Mysteriousclapper
MysteriousclapperLv1

I really like it the mc is good I hope more chapters for this ff

1yr
crazyspecter
crazyspecterLv14

writing quality top notch anything else not so much. The start of the story was interesting but then it became like any fanfic where the mc is changed randomly in a dumb idiot for plot reasons. The mc should be smart and powerful and a self insert but the author don't have him act as such. The last 4 chapters from 13 to 17 where painful to read because of this. In my book is not worth reading at least if you plan to keep your neurons active

1yr
AspiringPedo
AspiringPedoLv4

Mc is too merciful. Man was betrayed back to back to back and he doesn’t even punish the offenders even a little bit! Bruh, all he does is give them a headpat, I can’t even with this….

1yr
darkfoxflamess
darkfoxflamessLv1

Reveal spoiler

1yr
ferferfer2
ferferfer2Lv5

Reveal spoiler

1yr
SlimNeez
SlimNeezLv14

The book had many plot holes and the author just makes stuff up along the way and it makes no sense canonically. Making OC’s for the MC for no reason, characters are stupid to make MC look “smart”, giving powers to the MC out of nowhere, the fights are annoying to read since every enemy group is like a peanut gallery just describing his attacks when we just read the fight, the MC repeats a lot of stuff and contradicts what he said the chapter before, etc. I could go on but its not worth it tbh TL:DR If u want to give this fanfic a try, turn ur brain off and just accept everything no matter how stupid and unrealistic it is.

1yr
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