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ScottyTheD
ScottyTheDLv51yr
2023-01-01 11:48

Don't waste your time, the grammar is so bad you basically need to be a codebreaker to read it coherently.

Marvel:start as Golden superman

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ScottyTheD
ScottyTheDLv5

Mate, I'm not trying to insult you, I'm just telling the truth. If you want something constructive, here it is: Get yourself a native English speaking editor to go over your entire story for you, that or pay for grammarly, and use that to help your writing.

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Bro I came from a middle-class family so you know my situation I can't afford an editor or Grammarly premium but still I am using Grammarly's normal version and English is not my first oanguage

ScottyTheD:Mate, I'm not trying to insult you, I'm just telling the truth. If you want something constructive, here it is: Get yourself a native English speaking editor to go over your entire story for you, that or pay for grammarly, and use that to help your writing.
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Kiradeux
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Cliche but entertaining plot ideas poorly woven together into a story. As it stands, this story is more a stream of thought than a story. The creativity is there, the writing is not. Each chapter gets a sub-50 score in the free version of Grammarly. Full of run-on-sentences and practically zero punctuation, there are plenty of places for improvement in this authors writing - but it can improve if he tries. Both names and beginnings of sentences need capitalization, sentences need to be broken up into logical segments (Run the paragraph through any number of free pieces of Text-to-speech software to hear it for yourself), and the author needs to start aiming for scores 50+ on Grammarly before posting - with an ultimate goal of eventually reaching 90+. Once that's done, the only issue left is rhythm to which I have no real suggestion to fix besides practice. If this author chooses to continue writing, I pray they make appropriate use of the free tools and advice to improve their work - elsewise the score of this review shall stand testimony aside its kin.

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Laxmi_narayan
Laxmi_narayanLv4

I think you uploaded 3 to 5 charters daily and you should use auto correction future during writing for better grammer

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