Item: Marvel:start as Golden superman
Rating: 2.6
Author: Jhoppy97

Jhoppy97Lv152yr

2022-11-14 19:29

I only got a couple paragraphs in and I had to stop reading because the writing was so bad so to the author please fix your grammar

Marvel:start as Golden superman

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