Very Interesting take on the story. Lily Potter survives and takes care of Harry, so we have a powerful Harry with a backbone. Plus the Marvel element *chef's kiss* Keep going and don't drop.
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Is there a paring?
The pairing or any relationship hasn't started yet...
machadogbc:Is there a paring?
But who will be the female lead?
Don't make it Harem. Unless your already adept at writing romance stuff, stories always tend to go sideways and plummet downwards.
InGlorious:The pairing or any relationship hasn't started yet...
The readers liked what I did with Epic of Leviathan and I hosted a Poll for this Fic and Harem won
Crolly_1118:Don't make it Harem. Unless your already adept at writing romance stuff, stories always tend to go sideways and plummet downwards.
Not that interesting, its a generic super harry who can do no wrong and has magic spewing out of his butt. Has more intelligence than all of mankind combined. You know the usual bad tropes
Scoff!* of course Harem won, what did you expect?
InGlorious:The readers liked what I did with Epic of Leviathan and I hosted a Poll for this Fic and Harem won
I expected guys who hate Harem to with no Harem, but they didn't even vote... *scoff too*
Crolly_1118:Scoff!* of course Harem won, what did you expect?
no such guys exist, they only hate harem cause of bad writing, or their favourite character not getting enough screentime or affection from the MC cause of the others in the harem
InGlorious:I expected guys who hate Harem to with no Harem, but they didn't even vote... *scoff too*
very true, I don't like reading harem fics and it's ONLY because the authors get lazy with the pairings and development of the relationships, characters, or even the situations that lead them to accept joining the harem. very few do a good enough job for me to finish the story.
Rune_God:no such guys exist, they only hate harem cause of bad writing, or their favourite character not getting enough screentime or affection from the MC cause of the others in the harem
yey harém wins
InGlorious:The readers liked what I did with Epic of Leviathan and I hosted a Poll for this Fic and Harem won
true. what sucks is his biggest story started great with the harem. momo became more developed as a character and lover. same with midnight too. and rumi. but then the author kind of went lax on developing any others. he also made the mc too strong too fast. after the marvel world there was no struggle or conflict.
Quin_Bland:very true, I don't like reading harem fics and it's ONLY because the authors get lazy with the pairings and development of the relationships, characters, or even the situations that lead them to accept joining the harem. very few do a good enough job for me to finish the story.
It’s also a problem when the author wants to please everyone né add every female possible to the harem. Harems are only good when it’s well thought out. and I like harems kkk.
Nobody hates harem. People are annoyed when there is too much harem and little plot, or too much plot, so there is little screen time for the harem thus making it feel forced. If there was an equilibrium, and the characters weren't constantly meat riding the MC and actually in a poly relationship where everyone loved each other, things could be done correctly.
InGlorious:I expected guys who hate Harem to with no Harem, but they didn't even vote... *scoff too*
Onde entra o elemento marvel?
Do you know where a harem works? Nowhere, because who in their right mind would agree to share a relationship with 30, 50, 100 people... not to mention that they are human! Where everyone loves each other, lol. Are you talking about humans who kill over the slightest amount of jealousy? Or something better? It must be strange and amazing people flocking to enjoy a single person... That's complete selfishness and naivety... If you're over 21 and think like that... God
DarkCreation101:Nobody hates harem. People are annoyed when there is too much harem and little plot, or too much plot, so there is little screen time for the harem thus making it feel forced. If there was an equilibrium, and the characters weren't constantly meat riding the MC and actually in a poly relationship where everyone loved each other, things could be done correctly.
This is quite literally a fanfic, why does it matter how real people act? Are you saying that in places like this it's not okay to have a harem? I mean they're basically just a modern Arthurian era, meaning many people in that era had harems.
Thiago_guedes:Do you know where a harem works? Nowhere, because who in their right mind would agree to share a relationship with 30, 50, 100 people... not to mention that they are human! Where everyone loves each other, lol. Are you talking about humans who kill over the slightest amount of jealousy? Or something better? It must be strange and amazing people flocking to enjoy a single person... That's complete selfishness and naivety... If you're over 21 and think like that... God
slave harem, idiot.... where did I say I was basing myself on reality?
DarkCreation101:This is quite literally a fanfic, why does it matter how real people act? Are you saying that in places like this it's not okay to have a harem? I mean they're basically just a modern Arthurian era, meaning many people in that era had harems.
Doesn’t mean harems are good or that they make any sense in the story. Plus writing a good harem story is hard and is easy to mess up.
InGlorious:The readers liked what I did with Epic of Leviathan and I hosted a Poll for this Fic and Harem won
No I genuinely hate harems
Rune_God:no such guys exist, they only hate harem cause of bad writing, or their favourite character not getting enough screentime or affection from the MC cause of the others in the harem
