Crolly_1118

What's with the aggression? Your time of the month?

I think it wouldn't be that strange given that Mc is a well-known Kendoka.

You should always stick to your character's general behavior/disposition/personality. When you look back at previous chapters, his past life, and the MC's character developments along the way, you should always ask yourself: [Would this be something he/she would do?] [Is this how he/she would act in this given situation?] Even with Mc's characteristic bluntness. I don't think he would say: 'I was just enchanted with your beauty.' (So XianXia-like.) Rather, he would say exactly what he's doing: 'I'm inspecting your... everything. You have a very Impressive physique. Have you thought about training?' But well, this is your story. You do you.

'She is a Woman stronger than MOST men she encountered.' 'She was neither soft nor healing; her hands could crush rocks'

We train them early if possible, yes.

Ew! why?!!

Is he not an adult back on earth?

That much desperate to gain approval? really? how utterly pathetic. You know you could have written him a lot serenely, and with a bit more dignity if you wanted.

Yes, actually. Nc.

That's a very dangerous statement.