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2022-11-12 14:32

Alaye!!!, it's clear that you've put a lot of thought into this fic. The development of the story is superb. You need to work on the speech patterns of done of the characters like Sam saying "I cannot" like a proper British gentleman instead of "I can't" like the black army vet he is. Keep up the good work, I look forward to many more chapters. You're doing 9ja proud.

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