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2022-11-12 02:42

So I finished the story on FF, and it's pretty good. Story flow is excellent but can be a little forced sometimes. Towards the end, it felt like the story was on rails though. The story finished in 2020, so it doesn't account for the incoming MCU changes. Therefore, the ending isn't my favorite and was probably better back when it was first written. This is probably in my top 10 best marvel FFs.

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unknown_daoistLv14

what changes in particular dod affect the story from the after 2020 mcu?

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Well, the ending makes no mention of Tiamut being on Earth, no Kang the Conqueror or what fallout happens from the last Dr. Strange movie. Also, there's nothing from the Black Widow movie (2021). I haven't seen Black Widow, so there may be other things missing that don't get addressed that I don't know about. It's not the author's fault as there's no way they could have known what would happen after they finished the story. It's not a bad ending by any means and still worth reading. It's just that when reading it, you'll know that it would have been different if it were finished in 2022 instead of 2020.

unknown_daoist:what changes in particular dod affect the story from the after 2020 mcu?
Gabbu_Xul
Gabbu_XulLv14

Actually, forget the Dr. Strange part. Wanda wouldn't have gone crazy as *spoiler* Vision doesn't die.*end spoiler* Therefore, the last Dr. Strange movie wouldn't have happened. Or at least she wouldn't have the Darkhold for the reasons that she did, and it would likely be someone else with the Darkhold.

Gabbu_Xul:Well, the ending makes no mention of Tiamut being on Earth, no Kang the Conqueror or what fallout happens from the last Dr. Strange movie. Also, there's nothing from the Black Widow movie (2021). I haven't seen Black Widow, so there may be other things missing that don't get addressed that I don't know about. It's not the author's fault as there's no way they could have known what would happen after they finished the story. It's not a bad ending by any means and still worth reading. It's just that when reading it, you'll know that it would have been different if it were finished in 2022 instead of 2020.
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