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DeejaeSutherland
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2024-12-15 07:18

I was really looking forward to reading this, but instead, I got disappointed at the lack of structure, and the grammar was okay, but it could definitely be better, along with having no clue what was going on besides someone's sister dieing because of a bolt of lightning? There was no background to the story or character description.

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Antedeguemon
AntedeguemonAuthor

Thank you for your feedback! Hopefully, the next chapters will be of your liking.

Leon_Luis_
Leon_Luis_Lv4

Harem or No Harem

Antedeguemon:Thank you for your feedback! Hopefully, the next chapters will be of your liking.
LordCampione
LordCampioneLv15

answer?

Leon_Luis_:Harem or No Harem
Leon_Luis_
Leon_Luis_Lv4

idk didn't get an answer myself

LordCampione:answer?
LordCampione
LordCampioneLv15

So author-san you gonna answer our question?? is it a harem or something similar??

Antedeguemon:Thank you for your feedback! Hopefully, the next chapters will be of your liking.
Antedeguemon
AntedeguemonAuthor

It's possible. Don't get your hopes up.

Leon_Luis_:Harem or No Harem
Leon_Luis_
Leon_Luis_Lv4

Farewell then, i hope you have a good day

Antedeguemon:It's possible. Don't get your hopes up.
Leon_Luis_
Leon_Luis_Lv4

he replied. Check it out for yourself

LordCampione:answer?
Antedeguemon
AntedeguemonAuthor

You too, my friend. Happy new year.

Leon_Luis_:Farewell then, i hope you have a good day
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Leon_Luis_
Leon_Luis_Lv4

Happy New Year and lets hope we encounter each other under better circumstances.(make a no harem fic and i would read it)

Antedeguemon:You too, my friend. Happy new year.
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