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BallTheTsar
BallTheTsarLv42yr
2022-11-19 12:19

Trash. Utter trash. The fic is too angsty. The mc is stupid, wimpy, overly dramatic and always cribbing. He has no talent, no golden finger, no nothing. He is too week and still cant beat the 2nd worst of the academy (as of now). It's been 18 chapters and he still hasn't improved at all. Honestly expected better from the author since I've read is HP fic. Hope it's gets better.

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Julian_Foxall
Julian_FoxallLv4

Oh please, that's the point of the story, a character just dropped out of the blue with nothing special or godly to his name. How do you expect people to react to landing in a world where genocide is the bread and jam of the day?

Glizzy567
Glizzy567Lv3

This is the best Naruto Fic on this cite. This Fanfiction makes a better arguement for hardwork beats talent than the original series.

Keyaruga_Tsuki
Keyaruga_TsukiLv3

this one read up to chapter 18 and wants an op Mc with a system.I guess I see the type of people these low reviewers are.Completely untrust worthy reviews now I have to read it.

histidine
histidineLv1

no, in naruto hard work doesnt beat talent. and that's because talented people in naruto work just as hard as anybody else and authors trying to cheapen it by making their "hardworking" MC with 0 talent be better than them is ridiculous. and this fic isnt about an average MC, i dont expect him to spam rasengan or be the strongest because it simply isnt possible for him no matter how hard he works. only if he had a high intelligence and low moral standards along with some luck and basic level talent maybe he could achieve something from human experiments and knowing the plot. but the problem here is he isnt particularly bright and not familiar with side plots along with weak mentality that doesnt seem likely to change soon he is doomed to die (unless plot armor)

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