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leo26
leo26Lv122yr
2022-11-12 18:35

It's pretty boring so far, Feels like a nothing burger, I get having a slow buildup and all but this just doesn't feel like a satisfying read to me. All you get is a desperate mc and all you feel is pity for him and that's all, The writing quality is good but the progression is not and that's all I have to say. Will update the review depending on whether the novels gets good or bad.(Some people might complain that it's too early to judge the novel in just the first 12 chapters but I think it's fair, people are even giving the fic 5 star just on the basis of his previous novels, so I think it's fair)

Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

FictionOnlyReader
4.2
369 Chs

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VOID_
VOID_Lv12

Then check out Rise of the Infinite Sovereign

2yr
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LORD_sKY
LORD_sKYLv1

Check out Naruto: Time Manipulation yes I'm the author and I have no shame in promoting it

2yr
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Dark_Wiz
Dark_WizLv4

why would you even mention anything about shame. if u launch a product it's given that u promote it. same thing.

LORD_sKY: Check out Naruto: Time Manipulation yes I'm the author and I have no shame in promoting it
2yr
13
puros
purosLv14

Pls re-read this i would say its one of the beast novels i have seen ,its slow yes but the world view of Naruto that the author have its refreshing and deep.

6mth
3
SaintNull
SaintNullLv2

So you won't mind to look at my dragon ball fanfiction?

Dark_Wiz:why would you even mention anything about shame. if u launch a product it's given that u promote it. same thing.
6mth
1
leo26
leo26Lv12

Yeah i am planning to re-read once i have some time

puros:Pls re-read this i would say its one of the beast novels i have seen ,its slow yes but the world view of Naruto that the author have its refreshing and deep.
6mth
1
Dark_Wiz
Dark_WizLv4

if it gets more than 40 chaps....till then it rests in my wishlist

SaintNull:So you won't mind to look at my dragon ball fanfiction?
6mth
2
Osyozy12345
Osyozy12345Lv4

I honestly love weak to strong fics and I absolutely as God is my witness I hate op fics but this novel is making me doubt my taste

2mth
thunder_cat_2369
thunder_cat_2369Lv14

this is legit the only story on webnovel I care to keep up with right now not that there are other ones I like but I've only been interested in this story for a while it is slow and the main character is weaker than I want him to be but I still think it's a great story

1mth
fkb
fkbLv6

this aged well

3d
Other Reviews
danty
dantyLv4

There are stories with op mcs and there are stories that go too far into the opposite direction. It's clear at times how the author tries to portray a desperate situation even if it doesn't make any sense. Biggest gripe about this story is the inconsistent characterization of the Mc, one day the author portrays him as a young adult fully aware of consequences, objectivity and long term planning. Next time he writes him as a 6 year old kid. Why not ask his peers or teachers to review the curriculum? Why is he even training if he knows genin are child soldiers? Would being bullied by kids really bother a 20 year old transmigrator? If that's what the author intended he should've the Mc should have been at least aware of the discrepancy.

2yr

maxphantom
maxphantomLv4

just stop man. this is insufferable. mc is pathetic beta and idiot. Mf got into coma at the thought of not being able to use chakara. Didn’t he watched the fillers. The method to become op in Narutos World is unlimited.

2yr
maxphantom
maxphantomLv4

overrated garbage. nothing else. mc is beta trash and pathetic. i mean i have read tons of trash fanfic before but even in them mc wasn’t this much pathetic. So sorry man. I tried my best to see any hidden buildup or anything that you might be building in the fic. But all I found was garbage.

2yr
asaade
asaadeLv10

please don't rate it because of his old work, this story is full of angst and depression if that is to your liking feel free to read it 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0

2yr
Kobyfate
KobyfateLv10

Woah-woah-woah, it is naruto fic from FictionOnlyReader, I really believe that it will be a great story. Good luck author.⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀

2yr
DaoistpHVVPI
DaoistpHVVPILv1

i really enjoyed your previous work. but this is very boring. seems like the mc is regressing. the mc really has nothing that makes me want to like them so far. with quin i loved instantly. this mc is just pitiful. i'm going to let this build up for a bit. i shall come back in a month hopefully something might happen that makes me want to continue reading. if i could stick through the sin vault arc. i can make it through this. best wishes

2yr
JimmyBlah
JimmyBlahLv14

It’s crazy how used to ’instant-OP’ MC’s people are.. this is an incredibly down-to-earth and realistic approach of something who went through a bunch of traumatic experiences and is having a hard time catching up. Is It perfect? Of course not lol. But it’s approach is something you really don’t see that often in this series and that alone makes it unique and (imo) fun to read. Can’t wait to enjoy more of it 🥂

2yr
Mirio_kun
Mirio_kunLv1

If you are massecist, likes angst, seeing how phatic the mc is it's for you. It's a waste of time also ruining any good mood. The hope that things will change has been crushed after reading till 17 chapter and still mc being a weakling in world will no hope.

2yr
N_Nelson
N_NelsonLv4

I'm finally ready to review this, I think most positive reviews are cuz of the previous work of the author but the mc is having too much discrepancy, I get the author wants to portray the feeling of the mc but wanting to cry cuz he missed targets, that just seems awkward, I'll just say I'm not feeling the story, I get the author doesn't want to do the op mc stuff, doing the opposite is ok but this is going to far especially with the unnecessary angst

2yr
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