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Willhem_Duy
Willhem_DuyLv22yr
2022-12-14 22:45

Well, the story has a rocky start until chapter 10 where it has got better from time to time, I like the [Mark's pov] chapters where you get a different taste from the usual introvert mc. Speaking of mc, he isn't quite as bad as the more he gets fleshed out in a later chapter. The story is relatively slow-paced so it may not suit some. The system is well-describe? As it get strained to read at PC, the detail of the character quite informative is what I can say. A solid story 6.5/10

Villain Is on Vacation

Madwriter_2377
4.6
171 Chs

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Drurlulu
DrurluluLv13

yes! finally found a good review that's not overly positive or negative in a novel!

2yr
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ywhy4_
ywhy4_Lv4

I liked everything about this novel except for the short chapters

2yr

Madwriter_2377
Madwriter_2377Author

As my novel is getting so much attention. I think it's time for another mandatory author review. As the story is approaching 100 chapters let me tell you some things. -Mc at first will be little emotional after thinking about some things, however he won't be in later plot. -There will be some slice of life chapters between novel. -System might sound sentinel. However it's different. It won't interfere in the story much. -Romance won't be introduced in first volume however some hints will be dropped. -There will be much of world building information so you can skip it if you won't and read it after some time when you feel it. I have made separate chapters for them. -If you forgot some stuff, Read the auxiliary chapters. You will find it. -Still you feel to suggest something, feel free to do so.

2yr
Dark_Horse_5286
Dark_Horse_5286Lv1

This was very nice novel , I quite like it, and MC is also smart not dense or dumb.

2yr
WrittenInSin
WrittenInSinLv4

The story was very enjoyable. I just binge-read the entire thing. But as far as a review goes, it doesn't leave a strong impression on me. It's kinda meh. From the MC's parents to his fiance and sister, the characters feel a bit shallow and very one-dimensional. The story tries to explain this but fails to convince you. All in all a good read. Good luck to the author.👍

1yr
Shadowlancer101
Shadowlancer101Lv4

Author-nim I am dying without the sweet nectar that is this work!! I hope you come back soon and that Emma and kaya have a complete regret arc and have some not-so-happy endings.

1yr
SandMaster7
SandMaster7Lv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
K7RM4
K7RM4Lv13

author mc needs more screen time bro why are other characters getting more chapters than him man (it seems that way to me) and these excesively unnecessary discriptions and redundant dialogues in the couple chapters before and including chp 113 is making a tad bit boring and a chore to read THIS IS MY OPINION AND I ACTUALLY LIKE THE BOOK

2yr
Aadarsh_Singh_0798
Aadarsh_Singh_0798Lv2

man i think the author is dead. It has been f**king 1 year since last upload. i have lost all hope of getting new chapters. man and i thought i was a lazy slack

7mth
Kaizou_Koi
Kaizou_KoiLv12

Man I really like this novel.I hope the author keeps this novel updated regularly.

2yr
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