As my novel is getting so much attention. I think it's time for another mandatory author review. As the story is approaching 100 chapters let me tell you some things. -Mc at first will be little emotional after thinking about some things, however he won't be in later plot. -There will be some slice of life chapters between novel. -System might sound sentinel. However it's different. It won't interfere in the story much. -Romance won't be introduced in first volume however some hints will be dropped. -There will be much of world building information so you can skip it if you won't and read it after some time when you feel it. I have made separate chapters for them. -If you forgot some stuff, Read the auxiliary chapters. You will find it. -Still you feel to suggest something, feel free to do so.
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LIKEAbout Kaya, she is not. I am not a fan of brother sister relationships. About Emma, can't say about her. However at this moment it isn't
About MC's intelligence, I he is above average. But don't think he will be like other MC's who have 200+ IQ. There will be lemons after 200 Chapters. It will be 2-3. About comedy, it's just a small comedy Not much.
He is above average ? Is that why just after getting the system he called it garbage ?