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Carrottop
CarrottopLv12yr
2022-10-31 19:44

Biggest issue that stands out as soon as you start reading is the grammar. It's hard to get through a single sentence without noticing the disjointed grammar mistakes. Also, the reviews in this story seem like bots, with the same "people" giving five star reviews with no elaboration.

Vulcan Odinson - The God of Fire [MCU]

Zerufuke081205
4.0
13 Chs

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Zerufuke081205
Zerufuke081205Author

They are bots as to get the rating for attracting more viewers. I will delete those comments once I got a rating even without them.

2yr
Zerufuke081205
Zerufuke081205Author

I will edit those chapters and fix those grammer mistakes soon in my free time.

2yr
Other Reviews
Bilal_Irshad
Bilal_IrshadLv3

please author don't you dare to leave this fanfiction Incomplete

2yr

Mattex97
Mattex97Lv14

Bro why no Harem 😑😑😑the world is literally made for it

2yr
Josden
JosdenLv13

I don't see why writing a psychopathic character without remorse is better than a hero. All fanfiction writers think they are original when they write such a character, but they don't. It is commonplace and often poorly developed.

2yr
MimicReads
MimicReadsLv14

soo many bots, doing this just to even it out

2yr
Zerufuke081205
Zerufuke081205Author

I hope you will be able to give your reviews honestly as that would help tremendously. Hope you enjoy your read

2yr
Avery025
Avery025Lv14

I really wanted to like this one, but I couldn’t even finish the first chapter. I have seen my fair share of mtl novels, but this one just has grammar and sentence structural errors every. single. sentence. I literally can’t make this up.

2yr
Oleg_Nikitin
Oleg_NikitinLv1

Классная работа, очень хочется увидеть продолжение.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

9mth
darren_burns
darren_burnsLv10

Please update this soon I want to see how Vulcan Odinson continues to develop as God of Fire as perhaps he could prevent Hela from being banished by King Odin

1yr
Sword_saint_9027
Sword_saint_9027Lv1

For asgard .............................

2yr
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