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Mortimer_Darkbane
Mortimer_DarkbaneLv22mth
2024-11-09 21:28

First of all the MC is not an evil MC. He is your typical naive cultivation MC. But the story line is just too good. The world building, the characters and the plot , all are too good for a cultivation novel. But the main downside of this story is that the MC is carried by pure plot armor. The use of plot armor in this story is just insane. For example, once MC group was fighting an enemy group, MC group suddenly betray the MC. Then MC looked at the previous enemy group with a determined look, and boom, suddenly the enemy group was stunned by the determination of MC and sided with the MC. Then they teamed up and fight against the group that betrayed MC. Another one will be, MC is cultivating in closed door cultivation, MC made a mistake and he is suddenly on the verge of death, then suddenly a misterious grandpa appears and saves MC. These are just a few example of how insane the plot armour of the MC is. The last and most annoying thing about this novel is the character called Rui. She first wanted to manipulate MC into becoming a pill for her resurruction, MC found out about this, but he still didn't do anything about her. He just keep her with him. Then when MC enters an illusion, she try to manipulate him multiple times, but this stupid idiot keep beliving her words. It's almost sad and pathetic how naive this MC is.

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