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2023-07-14 05:28

Its ok not bad but not great and he still cares about his childhood friend which is annoying.

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SpicyDaoist
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Just curious, what chapter did you reach when you made this review? Just asking because this is a long novel and a bit of a slow burn. The MC changes constantly throughout the novel.

Asxre
AsxreLv13

I didnt read to far i made it to chapter 60

SpicyDaoist:Just curious, what chapter did you reach when you made this review? Just asking because this is a long novel and a bit of a slow burn. The MC changes constantly throughout the novel.
Asxre
AsxreLv13

Will he eventually not care about his childhood friend?

SpicyDaoist:Just curious, what chapter did you reach when you made this review? Just asking because this is a long novel and a bit of a slow burn. The MC changes constantly throughout the novel.
nihiility
nihiilityLv2

nah, spoiler alert, he has killed pretty much everyone that he knew from his life and loved

Asxre:Will he eventually not care about his childhood friend?
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As of the time I am making this review ( 5/19/2023) i have finished 278 chapters, and all I can say is that I am amazed by this authors genius. For the review I will split it into 5 sections Writing Quality, Stability of Updates, Story Development, Character Design. Writing Quality: 5/5 The writing quality is superb, The language and depictions on environments emotion and everything in-between thoroughly immerses the reader into the characters. Stability of updates: 5/5 as of 5/19/2023 the author updates the the story with a chapter everyday sometimes even multiple. Story Development: 5/5 The story development is phenomenal. It evolves throughout the entire story leaving the reader eagerly waiting for the next development. The author expertly weaves the story through the characters and unlike many other authors makes the story feel alive and connected. Character Design: 5/5 The character Design is the best part of the book the author not only explores the emotion and depth of the main character but others as well. Not only that but the character development of the main character is the best I have ever seen on webnovel, The main character goes through many struggles evolving his perspective on himself, the world and others. If you are looking for a purely evil main character this story is not for you. The main character is more than a villain. He is a human, he evolves and changes and although at some points he is villainous that is not all he is. World Background: 4/5 Although the World background is the worst part of the 4 other points of review it is still fairly good. The author does go into detail about the background of the world but in the grand scheme of the story I feel as though it's not enough. (spoilers ahead) The dimension's that the main character goes to don't have that much substance, you cant really feel the background that these dimension's have affecting the story in any tangible manner and you don't really feel engaged in what happens to the dimensions, For example the main character goes to a realm which is massive, thousands of kingdoms within a single empire, the leader of each kingdom being stronger than the main character. what's unfortunate is that you never really feel engaged with the empire/kingdoms. making them feel rather 1 dimensional. You really feel this 1 dimensionality when some kingdoms to war and you don't really care or feel intrigued about the outcome of the world. That being said I don't really think it dragged the story down that much because the story is more focused of the development of the main character and those around him. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Perhaps my thoughts on this book will worsen but so far this is one of if not the best stories on webnovel, would definitely recommend.

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