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FlankerKun
FlankerKunLv141yr
2023-09-04 11:53

I’m only on chapter 108 as of now,but so far it’s been pretty well written and all of that. The characters are interesting and it feels like everyone has their own motivations ect and the MC is exactly as the author described in the synopsis. All in all it’s a good story so far,I think it has the potential to go on for a long time,I just hope it doesnt get dropped or something😂 Ight I’m outie✌️

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CHAOS_FOOLISH
CHAOS_FOOLISHLv12

Hello, since you read the work, could you answer some questions, please? Well, if you can, the questions are as follows: is there ntr in the work? (I hope not), is there Yuri in the work? (I hope not), is there a yandere? Does MC really love girls? Or does he just use them and discard them? and how many girls are in the harem... if you could answer I would appreciate it! :D and forgive me for my bad English...

FlankerKun
FlankerKunLv14

I’m gonna try and give my best answers,so sorry if anything’s confusing. So far I’m on chapter 264 and there hasn’t been any ntr or yuri towards the MC,however the MC does ntr someone if not more later in the story. About the MC actually loving the girls,yes at least in my opinion but he’s having a hard time coming to terms with it. I can’t say much more because of spoilers. And for how many are in the harem,I’d say so far maybe 4-5 though it’s unofficial. Right now we’re still in early stages so a lot of things are coming together ect. This book really has the potential to go far and the author is taking his time with it so I’m fine with the pacing ect. I’d say give it a read but get ready for a good roller coaster of emotions. I hope I answered all of your questions well! Don’t worry about the bad English friend,it’s my native language yet I suck at it😂

CHAOS_FOOLISH:Hello, since you read the work, could you answer some questions, please? Well, if you can, the questions are as follows: is there ntr in the work? (I hope not), is there Yuri in the work? (I hope not), is there a yandere? Does MC really love girls? Or does he just use them and discard them? and how many girls are in the harem... if you could answer I would appreciate it! :D and forgive me for my bad English...
FlankerKun
FlankerKunLv14

Oh and yes,the queen is a yandre in my opinion.

CHAOS_FOOLISH:Hello, since you read the work, could you answer some questions, please? Well, if you can, the questions are as follows: is there ntr in the work? (I hope not), is there Yuri in the work? (I hope not), is there a yandere? Does MC really love girls? Or does he just use them and discard them? and how many girls are in the harem... if you could answer I would appreciate it! :D and forgive me for my bad English...
CHAOS_FOOLISH
CHAOS_FOOLISHLv12

thx

FlankerKun:I’m gonna try and give my best answers,so sorry if anything’s confusing. So far I’m on chapter 264 and there hasn’t been any ntr or yuri towards the MC,however the MC does ntr someone if not more later in the story. About the MC actually loving the girls,yes at least in my opinion but he’s having a hard time coming to terms with it. I can’t say much more because of spoilers. And for how many are in the harem,I’d say so far maybe 4-5 though it’s unofficial. Right now we’re still in early stages so a lot of things are coming together ect. This book really has the potential to go far and the author is taking his time with it so I’m fine with the pacing ect. I’d say give it a read but get ready for a good roller coaster of emotions. I hope I answered all of your questions well! Don’t worry about the bad English friend,it’s my native language yet I suck at it😂
CHAOS_FOOLISH
CHAOS_FOOLISHLv12

oh nice hehehhehehe

FlankerKun:Oh and yes,the queen is a yandre in my opinion.
FlankerKun
FlankerKunLv14

Haha yeah,just read it I’m sure you’ll love it

CHAOS_FOOLISH:oh nice hehehhehehe
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Redsafgg
RedsafggLv1

I apologize right away, English is not my first language. I agree with the previous comment, up to 500-600 chapters our main character influenced the plot, it was interesting to see how he made plans, how he realized them, how he gained strength. The world order itself was interesting, the conflicts in it and the situations our protagonist found himself in were well described, so they were often difficult, but gave him the opportunity to somehow get out of them, using the intelligence or strength he had acquired earlier. The dynamic with the female characters was interesting, the way our protagonist used them to overcome his trauma of mistrusting others, etc. But somewhere after chapter 600, it's like a different work, I don't see our hero as something that has been building for 500 chapters, now he's a dog running from point A to point B and unable to affect anything. Some plans are just discarded, if they exist at all. It feels like every antagonist got +100 IQ, and our hero got 100. And even the power that he had, it's like it just disappeared, if before our hero could fight some of the strongest characters alone, now to defeat one, he has to gather a whole group, I realize that because of some nuances he is limited in using all his power, but it doesn't suck that much. And starting at chapter 720, the river of shit started. With incomprehensible and unnecessary drama that makes you want to quit reading. To summarize, perhaps the author needed to take a break and think things through better, because everything that is being written now is too confusing. I'm going to put this work aside for now, maybe I'll finish it someday, because right now I have no desire to continue

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