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ResurgentAuthor1yr
2023-02-04 05:04

A second review note just to make few things clear after seeing how some are still confused whether MC is evil or not. I mentioned in my previous review note that MC will definitely be a 'Demon' and that means he will be doing demonic things. This is also why I added the tag "Dark" to let readers know that things ain't going to be moralistic or flowery for the most part. As for my definition of evil it means someone who does bad stuff for no remotely compelling reason at all just like how some just like to watch the world burn for no reason. (Of course, some of you might have a different interpretation) But the MC of this novel isn't like that. He does everything for a reason no matter how twisted or illogical it might seem. That is why I didn't add the 'Evil' tag but sure he will be doing a lot of evil things according to our society. The harem also won't be a typical harem filled with only wholesome moments. I am not saying there won't be wholesome moments but the romance and harem dynamic...well, they are going to be not so mainstream as well. I hope this answers most of the questions people were previously confused about. Thanks for reading and feel free to leave any questions :D

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Black_Reaper13Lv13

Will Asher continue with Merina or will he abandon her at some point?

ResurgentAuthor

He has no reason to abandon her unless she goes against him or something which is impossible.

Black_Reaper13:Will Asher continue with Merina or will he abandon her at some point?
ImUnknown987Lv3

ngl the health bars during fights ruin the action for me

ResurgentAuthor

Don't bother about it. I realised that and it isn't present after the first fight in the story 🙂

ImUnknown987:ngl the health bars during fights ruin the action for me
SugarApostleLv13

So the main pairing is with the Queen? And will he ever trust at least someone?

ResurgentAuthor

That we will have to see as story and characters develop

SugarApostle:So the main pairing is with the Queen? And will he ever trust at least someone?
Dare_Devil_1650Lv4

author bro have you deleted a novel of yours , because although i haven't read any of your novels yet but your name sounds familiar ?

ResurgentAuthor

nah i can't delete any novels

Dare_Devil_1650:author bro have you deleted a novel of yours , because although i haven't read any of your novels yet but your name sounds familiar ?
Andrew_CobblerLv1

I just wanted to say that your book has been quite amazing so far! It's been a great mix of dark moments, heartfelt moments, combat moments etc.. It seems that as of now, you are really balancing it out perfectly so just wanted to say congrats for that! Good luck with your writing and I hope the book stays as good as it is, because it's now the web novel I am looking forward too the most!

ResurgentAuthor

Thank you 😁

Andrew_Cobbler:I just wanted to say that your book has been quite amazing so far! It's been a great mix of dark moments, heartfelt moments, combat moments etc.. It seems that as of now, you are really balancing it out perfectly so just wanted to say congrats for that! Good luck with your writing and I hope the book stays as good as it is, because it's now the web novel I am looking forward too the most!
peace01Lv1

I was hoping you would post the quest levels

ResurgentAuthor

oh yea will do

peace01:I was hoping you would post the quest levels
ChillandReadaNovelLv4

Hello Author If I remember correctly in the early chapters the Mc's racial trait is darkness ryt? And when it's dark his recovery(?) increases ryt? So like is that all his racial trait can do?

ResurgentAuthor

Nop in later chapters he gains more bloodline abilities

Vexsel_SiegyarLv11

so does he actually loves the women he ends up with or they use each other for benefits with no love at all??

ResurgentAuthor

story isn't over so ..

Vexsel_Siegyar:so does he actually loves the women he ends up with or they use each other for benefits with no love at all??
_H_U_S_T_L_E_R_Lv4

will he have kids with only queen 👑. (I hope he only kid with queen not other harem members) and i hope his character development on king level. like having strong followers and i hope queen can also have charector devlopment and get stronger than she is now. { I love the wholesome moment between Asher and rowena. you wrote it perfectly. hope he develop strong felling for her. she can heal his broken heart} KEEP IT UP BRO IT'S MY TOP 3 FAVOURITE NOVEL.🙏🏻🤝

_H_U_S_T_L_E_R_Lv4

are you going to introduce other dragons from drake family and there history . and will Asher have his own dragon as pet since he is member of house drake

ResurgentAuthor

Yeap more to be introduced

_H_U_S_T_L_E_R_:are you going to introduce other dragons from drake family and there history . and will Asher have his own dragon as pet since he is member of house drake
young_master69Lv4

the story, the lore, the plot and the character development..etc are all good so far but the only problem i have with this novel is the mc's power, the fact that all his powers come from a ring and can be taken away by simply removing the ring is a kind of turn off for me, i mean yeah its bonded with him and is hard to destroy or remove but it is still an external tool at the end of the day, and it is far more easier to disarm someone than actually 'DISarming' them . so i just wanted to know if he will gain his own powers at some point in the story? if yes then does it happen when he reaches level 35 or even later in the story? i had previously left the story at around ch 40 and just started reading it again after a long time so i might have forgotten some details so if you find my comment inconsistent to the story then you know what's up.

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RedsafggLv1

I apologize right away, English is not my first language. I agree with the previous comment, up to 500-600 chapters our main character influenced the plot, it was interesting to see how he made plans, how he realized them, how he gained strength. The world order itself was interesting, the conflicts in it and the situations our protagonist found himself in were well described, so they were often difficult, but gave him the opportunity to somehow get out of them, using the intelligence or strength he had acquired earlier. The dynamic with the female characters was interesting, the way our protagonist used them to overcome his trauma of mistrusting others, etc. But somewhere after chapter 600, it's like a different work, I don't see our hero as something that has been building for 500 chapters, now he's a dog running from point A to point B and unable to affect anything. Some plans are just discarded, if they exist at all. It feels like every antagonist got +100 IQ, and our hero got 100. And even the power that he had, it's like it just disappeared, if before our hero could fight some of the strongest characters alone, now to defeat one, he has to gather a whole group, I realize that because of some nuances he is limited in using all his power, but it doesn't suck that much. And starting at chapter 720, the river of shit started. With incomprehensible and unnecessary drama that makes you want to quit reading. To summarize, perhaps the author needed to take a break and think things through better, because everything that is being written now is too confusing. I'm going to put this work aside for now, maybe I'll finish it someday, because right now I have no desire to continue

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