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WillTheThrill
WillTheThrillLv152yr
2023-01-15 02:32

TLDR: Rocky start but finds it’s footing soon enough, therefore worth a read. The beginning is rocky. The MC has a slow start that involves the traditional cliché of being derided from others for being a crippled but being allowed where he is due to his status as a consort. the plot starts to moving a bit faster after chapter 20, so stick around as it does get better. There are some plot developments that make little sense that are left opened for later explanations. MC is out for revenge, not a saint by any means, and seems to go the distance to get what he wants: power. Of course, he has not gone off the deep end… yet, as I am sure it will happen as some point. Characters include the traditional bunch of antagonists, a mixture of characters that have more depth that has yet to be seen, and gray characters. I’m currently at chapter 79 and a big moment just happened so I feel comfortable making a review now. I’m sticking with it for a while, as this author has delivered before. Updates are daily and grammar is of course better than majority on webnovel.

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Resurgent
ResurgentAuthor

Thanks for the detailed feedback 🤘

Dexter_Sled_1111
Dexter_Sled_1111Lv13

Boss. increase your update schedule na.It's not fair seeing this novel ranking below 30 because of the update schedule .So increase the update schedule. thanks.

Resurgent:Thanks for the detailed feedback 🤘
K4geno_K4mi
K4geno_K4miLv3

thanks i would have dropped this. I hate such cliches where evryone disrespects mc and he is just passive about it and after 50 chaps we can finally see a satsfying mc but that would be too much waste of reading if its like that

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Redsafgg
RedsafggLv1

I apologize right away, English is not my first language. I agree with the previous comment, up to 500-600 chapters our main character influenced the plot, it was interesting to see how he made plans, how he realized them, how he gained strength. The world order itself was interesting, the conflicts in it and the situations our protagonist found himself in were well described, so they were often difficult, but gave him the opportunity to somehow get out of them, using the intelligence or strength he had acquired earlier. The dynamic with the female characters was interesting, the way our protagonist used them to overcome his trauma of mistrusting others, etc. But somewhere after chapter 600, it's like a different work, I don't see our hero as something that has been building for 500 chapters, now he's a dog running from point A to point B and unable to affect anything. Some plans are just discarded, if they exist at all. It feels like every antagonist got +100 IQ, and our hero got 100. And even the power that he had, it's like it just disappeared, if before our hero could fight some of the strongest characters alone, now to defeat one, he has to gather a whole group, I realize that because of some nuances he is limited in using all his power, but it doesn't suck that much. And starting at chapter 720, the river of shit started. With incomprehensible and unnecessary drama that makes you want to quit reading. To summarize, perhaps the author needed to take a break and think things through better, because everything that is being written now is too confusing. I'm going to put this work aside for now, maybe I'll finish it someday, because right now I have no desire to continue

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