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WillTheThrill
WillTheThrillLv152yr
2023-01-15 10:32

TLDR: Rocky start but finds it’s footing soon enough, therefore worth a read. The beginning is rocky. The MC has a slow start that involves the traditional cliché of being derided from others for being a crippled but being allowed where he is due to his status as a consort. the plot starts to moving a bit faster after chapter 20, so stick around as it does get better. There are some plot developments that make little sense that are left opened for later explanations. MC is out for revenge, not a saint by any means, and seems to go the distance to get what he wants: power. Of course, he has not gone off the deep end… yet, as I am sure it will happen as some point. Characters include the traditional bunch of antagonists, a mixture of characters that have more depth that has yet to be seen, and gray characters. I’m currently at chapter 79 and a big moment just happened so I feel comfortable making a review now. I’m sticking with it for a while, as this author has delivered before. Updates are daily and grammar is of course better than majority on webnovel.

The Damned Demon

Resurgent
4.8
792 Chs

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Resurgent
ResurgentAuthor

Thanks for the detailed feedback 🤘

2yr
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Dexter_Sled_1111
Dexter_Sled_1111Lv13

Boss. increase your update schedule na.It's not fair seeing this novel ranking below 30 because of the update schedule .So increase the update schedule. thanks.

Resurgent:Thanks for the detailed feedback 🤘
1yr
1
K4geno_K4mi
K4geno_K4miLv3

thanks i would have dropped this. I hate such cliches where evryone disrespects mc and he is just passive about it and after 50 chaps we can finally see a satsfying mc but that would be too much waste of reading if its like that

1yr
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HellBoyMC
HellBoyMCLv13

I have read till the latest chapters and story is good so far. You can see author has experience writing and the scenes feel natural and not forced. I also like the mentality of MC who only cares about his revenge and is not trusting of others. His wife from what we have seen till now is a nice character so far. Story is an interesting take on hero and demon king including hunters. Author is setting up the story well with many questions which we want to know like the quest system, hunters, demon world and truth being Mc resurrection. A very good story till now and will recommend everyone to at least give it a try before drawing any conclusions.

2yr

Buco7854
Buco7854Lv13

the novel is pretty good so far, it's well written, I like the story a lot, nothing is rushed and it's not too slow imo, I saw some people telling it became worse recently but I just can't agree at all, we still discover new things and the reaping/raiding concept seems pretty interesting too. it's good that the relationship with the queen is not rushed, I mean it's more realistic like that, she doesn't seems to be interested in him in any way and that would be disappointing to see her harbor romantic feeling so quickly when it starts from 0. I' m still at chapter 75 but ig we will see her "take notice" of him after this quick "Arc" finish. Anyway all of that to say that is one of my favorite novel and I hope the author continue like that and don't drop it, that would be frustrating to see such a good work stop.

2yr
Resurgent
ResurgentAuthor

A second review note just to make few things clear after seeing how some are still confused whether MC is evil or not. I mentioned in my previous review note that MC will definitely be a 'Demon' and that means he will be doing demonic things. This is also why I added the tag "Dark" to let readers know that things ain't going to be moralistic or flowery for the most part. As for my definition of evil it means someone who does bad stuff for no remotely compelling reason at all just like how some just like to watch the world burn for no reason. (Of course, some of you might have a different interpretation) But the MC of this novel isn't like that. He does everything for a reason no matter how twisted or illogical it might seem. That is why I didn't add the 'Evil' tag but sure he will be doing a lot of evil things according to our society. The harem also won't be a typical harem filled with only wholesome moments. I am not saying there won't be wholesome moments but the romance and harem dynamic...well, they are going to be not so mainstream as well. I hope this answers most of the questions people were previously confused about. Thanks for reading and feel free to leave any questions :D

1yr
Resurgent
ResurgentAuthor

This is the first novel I am writing where the MC's morals and actions can be questionable. But for those wondering if MC is 'evil' or not, it is quite a difficult question to answer since it all comes down to perspective. However, I can confidently say that he is a 'Demon' indeed. Those readers who like virtuous heroes or with certain righteousness in MC should think twice before reading.

2yr
Melshan
MelshanLv7

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2yr
DaruisSupreme124
DaruisSupreme124Lv4

I swear if this author stops updating I will find his location and put him in my unfinished basement.. to forever write chapters just for me..

2yr
Redsafgg
RedsafggLv1

I apologize right away, English is not my first language. I agree with the previous comment, up to 500-600 chapters our main character influenced the plot, it was interesting to see how he made plans, how he realized them, how he gained strength. The world order itself was interesting, the conflicts in it and the situations our protagonist found himself in were well described, so they were often difficult, but gave him the opportunity to somehow get out of them, using the intelligence or strength he had acquired earlier. The dynamic with the female characters was interesting, the way our protagonist used them to overcome his trauma of mistrusting others, etc. But somewhere after chapter 600, it's like a different work, I don't see our hero as something that has been building for 500 chapters, now he's a dog running from point A to point B and unable to affect anything. Some plans are just discarded, if they exist at all. It feels like every antagonist got +100 IQ, and our hero got 100. And even the power that he had, it's like it just disappeared, if before our hero could fight some of the strongest characters alone, now to defeat one, he has to gather a whole group, I realize that because of some nuances he is limited in using all his power, but it doesn't suck that much. And starting at chapter 720, the river of shit started. With incomprehensible and unnecessary drama that makes you want to quit reading. To summarize, perhaps the author needed to take a break and think things through better, because everything that is being written now is too confusing. I'm going to put this work aside for now, maybe I'll finish it someday, because right now I have no desire to continue

1mth
Luohuo
LuohuoLv14

pretty good novel, harem buildup is pretty good till ch 280~ Mc is b3coming stronger relatively faster then others if u think as, all the girls around him have been training since they were children. Main revenge as a whole is still a long ways. But it is going there. Hopefully he goes through with it. Rarely any novel ever does that. it be a nice change in reincarnation hero story.I would recommend everyone who likes harem and characters with actual personality who grow, this is a good one.

1yr
Sir_Aaron_9542
Sir_Aaron_9542Lv4

This is a fantastic novel from the start, and is very GOATED. It would have been 5 stars based on the first 500 ish chapters. However, after 600 chaps or so, the plot slows down, and not in the boring way. Author keeps piling on plots upon plots, issues upon issues, and giving MC little to no means to deal with them quickly. MC doesn't have the strength to keep up with author's dogpiling, and the recent chapter 747 has introduced another big problem which has dropped most of my interest in the novel, at least for now. So I recommend you read the first few hundred chaps, and then by that time maybe author would have actually done something to have Asher climb out of the shithole Author has been digging for him. Dropped for the foreseeable future.

1mth
Tristan_Morgen1234
Tristan_Morgen1234Lv15

So far so good. Nothing really to complain about. All very positive results. Not to fond on the MC being betrayed by his loved ones but that's just me personally. The idea is good and it's a good start to the novel. Looking forward to seeing what this novel will become. Hopefully not too much betrayal. Would be cool to see some guilty individuals who regret what they did instead of being the heartless twits that are so commonly seen on this platform. Other than that, I'd say it's a good start.

2yr
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