Item: Marvel God of Blood
Rating: 5
Author: RyzenShine

RyzenShineLv42yr

2023-04-06 17:56

Can someone tell me if the writing quality stay the same or get better? right now I'm on chapter 5. This fanfic is good but its just little hard to understand cuz my main language is not english. (I do understand but it just hard to read that, cuz its trash. The writing quality)

Marvel God of Blood

Atrox_H

4.0

338 Chs

Liked by 2 people

Replies3

Atrox_HAuthor

Sorry for the first few chapters as i just started this thing, was not that experienced and also afraid to make some changes as it might affect the story. But it gets better on the latest maybe from around chapter 70 or 90, as i started to use grammarly. Give it a try.

2yr

Atrox_HAuthor

I'll try to re edit the first 20 or so chapters to improve new readers impression when I get time. Thank you for your review.

2yr

RyzenShineLv4

Ok thanks, I will give this a try.

Atrox_H:Sorry for the first few chapters as i just started this thing, was not that experienced and also afraid to make some changes as it might affect the story. But it gets better on the latest maybe from around chapter 70 or 90, as i started to use grammarly. Give it a try.

2yr

Other Reviews

Atrox_HAuthor

Hello guys, sorry for the sudden break. Due to some personal problem I had to take some break for a month. Don't worry, I'll continue to post chapter form next week. As usual 1 chapter per daily. I'm gonna start stockpiling chapters from today so I can post constantly, already have about 10 chapters. See ya

1yr

KiiidddLv14

I haven't read the story I just came here to leave the GIF

2yr

_VOIDLESS_Lv12

just came by to drop this gif .

2yr

Theo_MillerLv5

The poster did a good of translating the work. The story it self is one of worest fanfic I read in while. The MC has yonug master syndrome and terminal to my enjoyment of the story. I mean a vampire that doesn’t enjoy drinking blood sure it not like your body isn’t change to point it like a drug. I’m MC I’m better then these fonder. Solid translation though good work on that.

2yr

Atrox_HAuthor

Hi readers, new writer(more like poison testing Chinese translations) here. If there's any problem with grammar, lemme know. I'll also try to keep up the updates, atleast 2 chapters a day. See Ya..

2yr

Atrox_HAuthor

Hello readers, Just want to know, if the writing quality has improved or not. Compared to the first 10 or so chapters. How am I doing? Is it improving or not? Also, comment if you want me to re-write the first few chapters. as I get a lot of negative comments from there. English is my second language. So lemme know if there are any grammar mistakes.

2yr

_JuneDays_ozLv14

The translator is a nationa treasure, and the story is alright. I won’t say it the best because if you have read any Chinese fan fic then you want I’m talking about.

2yr

Puss_slayer_4000Lv14

Disappointing.

2yr

RavenClockLv4

Reveal spoiler

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Reveal spoiler

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