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kartik_agarwal
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2023-02-19 03:51

review after ch 26. I really enjoyed this story. I wasn't expecting such a story on webnovel, as most stories about villain, hero, isekai tags have many cliche tropes. But this one is really different. After each chapter, I can't imagine what will happen in next chapter here, as this story doesn't has any usual Chinese cliches. Also, the writing style of author is really unique. All the characters till now are 18 year old kids. And 18 year people are kids only, but Chinese novels either show them as super smart adultlike, or braindead courting death type villains. But in this story, all 18 year olds are shown like that only. Some are incredibly naive, like edward, some are anxious type who are afraid of speaking in public, some are hot headed, while one invites a friend for first time in her house, and goes running from one room to another.. I really liked the writing style, and I believe this story can be excellent for stage plays, but maybe not so good for converting to manhwa. Author keep up the good work

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RandomSwordsThief
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Maturity comes with experience, not age. People living in the medieval era had more responsibilities in their youth than in modern times. In fact, it was pretty normal to be a parent at 16. People are how you treat them to be. teenagers nowadays are treated as and called kids and hence they act like ones. But in reality, the moment you hit puberty, you are already an adult.

ChocolatChan
ChocolatChanLv12

"But in reality, the moment you hit puberty, you are already an adult." Sorry, I'm gonna have to argue with this statement. Although yes, maturity comes with experience and not age. However, don't expect a 13 year old that just hit puberty, who are at their most vulnerable state due to hormone changes, to have the capacity to make adult decision. Your brain is just starting to developed. You can not compare it to fully developed adult brain. On another note, I still have not read this webnovel yet.

RandomSwordsThief:Maturity comes with experience, not age. People living in the medieval era had more responsibilities in their youth than in modern times. In fact, it was pretty normal to be a parent at 16. People are how you treat them to be. teenagers nowadays are treated as and called kids and hence they act like ones. But in reality, the moment you hit puberty, you are already an adult.
ADITH_K_K
ADITH_K_KLv4

“But in reality, the moment you hit puberty you’re already an adult”

nightreaper126
nightreaper126Lv14

I think what they meant was the second you are done with puberty and your emotions are in check you are an adult.

ADITH_K_K:“But in reality, the moment you hit puberty you’re already an adult”
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THE_alpinism
THE_alpinismLv4

we want to believe u bud. we really do. but the evidence doesn't lie.

nightreaper126:I think what they meant was the second you are done with puberty and your emotions are in check you are an adult.
nightreaper126
nightreaper126Lv14

sure it's okay just that is how I see it

THE_alpinism:we want to believe u bud. we really do. but the evidence doesn't lie.
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