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2023-09-02 21:54

Hello, after reading about the first 100 of the chapters, i must say the book’s pretty good, especially for reading as a pastime. Although i must say the chapters at the outset are adorned with characters just conversing about childish subjects and cringeworthy remarks. I must say as the author has improved with his/her writing as the chapters have materialized. The only downside is that the author doesn’t describe the characters often whenever they appear. As a result, I just end up forgetting how most of the characters look like whenever I come back reading it after a while, due to the fact that my mind is also preoccupied with reading many other books other than this one. So i hope the author considers this little flaw. Ty!

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