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GreedyHuman
GreedyHumanLv111yr
2023-04-04 16:55

review based: 26 chapter (drop) Writing - there's snall mistakes but it's readable 5 ⭐ story - its copy from the original i feel like reading the original tbate while reading this but different mc 3 ⭐ characters - for me changing ayano personality to become soft and loving is bad it felt wierd idk if other's will like it so be warned 3 ⭐ update - dc about this part 5 ⭐ World - this book lack world background but im giving this a 4 ⭐ Evaluation: i drop this because the story is same as original and the mc(ayanokoji) becoming soft and loving that's just no for me but except for that this book is good

TBATE : A Masterpiece

Reprobate69_1
4.5
79 Chs

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Reprobate69_1
Reprobate69_1Author

Totally understandable. Although lol there are a lot of changes. Its just you and your small brain that is unable to pick it up. But eh, glad you dropped midway. Couldn’t have bothered silly comments later on anyways. Cheers mate!

1yr
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GreedyHuman
GreedyHumanLv11

I understand that you have a different perspective, but I don't appreciate being insulted I even bothered to waste my time writing this review because other might think that this book have a mc that is emotionless and manipulator mc then they'll leave a review like mine too i just write this review so they can read this and leave if not for their liking

Reprobate69_1:Totally understandable. Although lol there are a lot of changes. Its just you and your small brain that is unable to pick it up. But eh, glad you dropped midway. Couldn’t have bothered silly comments later on anyways. Cheers mate!
1yr
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Blasphemer_reader
Blasphemer_readerLv14

thanks mate appreciate it, I was going to give it a try but after reading that oh so high ego Author I'm not gonna 🫡 I Mean someone who can't appreciate a critic hailed either from china or PRK 😂

GreedyHuman:I understand that you have a different perspective, but I don't appreciate being insulted I even bothered to waste my time writing this review because other might think that this book have a mc that is emotionless and manipulator mc then they'll leave a review like mine too i just write this review so they can read this and leave if not for their liking
1yr
6
Hahadavis
HahadavisLv5

insulting readers just because they gave your story some criticism(which wasn’t even that bad) he wrote a nice detailed review on why he dropped your story and even told other people to give it a try and see for themselves, Your response shows how much of a dic$ you are!

Reprobate69_1:Totally understandable. Although lol there are a lot of changes. Its just you and your small brain that is unable to pick it up. But eh, glad you dropped midway. Couldn’t have bothered silly comments later on anyways. Cheers mate!
1yr
4
OtakuSad0
OtakuSad0Lv3

author-kun is such a good person, how can you speak ill of him, just kidding lol

1yr
GuYueFangYuan
GuYueFangYuanLv4

Thx for saving my time

8mth
Demonwolf07
Demonwolf07Lv4

yeah, he is speaking as if he did anything of his own, The story is the same as the original just the character changed.

GreedyHuman:I understand that you have a different perspective, but I don't appreciate being insulted I even bothered to waste my time writing this review because other might think that this book have a mc that is emotionless and manipulator mc then they'll leave a review like mine too i just write this review so they can read this and leave if not for their liking
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equality
equalityLv3

In my opinion, this is one of the best TBATE fanfics on this site. From the grammar to the interactions and the character designs, everything seems to be going well so far. I suggest whoever is reading this try it out.

2yr

timelessman
timelessmanLv4

hmm I'm not really good at writing revs but oh well. first of all writing quality is good an easy 5, the grammar and writing in this is better than most fanfics out there but it still has some typos tho very little but meh who doesn't make mistakes? story development is going good so far I like it and I'm very looking forward to future development especially he and Arthur's encounter. so easy 5 character design is superb man I don't know much about ayanokoji as I have only watched the anime but from there I can see that ayanokoji here is written pretty well, character interaction is also good and other characters aren't just abandoned they have uh... essence? idk I can't accurately describe it cuz I'm starving haha I've binge read this till morning anyways it has essence u know a properly built character not just some empty husk, the changing of different perspective (pov) is also good so overall 5. updating stability hmm idk I just binge it this day but seeing the update date from the last chaps I'll give it a 5, but uhh yo author are u planning on dropping this? hope not.. world background what can I say... just 5 so overall 5/5 here's my review mate hope u don't drop your work, and I'm my next read will be your other tbate fic debacle hope I enjoy it. adios~>_^

1yr
Fap2Me
Fap2MeLv3

To summarize, if you are willing to overlook the obvious flaws in the core system, this is a very well written novel. The writing quality is excellent and deserves five stars, so please expect it to be better than most fanfictions. Certainly, the character design resembles Ayanakoji. So far, the story development appears to be going well, and you can really get into it. The update's stability appears to be satisfactory. The world background consists of five stars. Author, your writing is excellent. I give it a 4.8/5. As previously stated, the core system is horribly written and detracts from the beautiful writing. Still worth reading though!

1yr
Vaneford
VanefordLv3

Welp my man is not kidding when he said Masterpiece[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

1yr
KnightMane
KnightManeLv2

if you drop it I'll drop by at your house and you'll disappear for good so don't even thinks bout it

1yr
bullaling
bullalingLv10

. .

2yr
_GLT_
_GLT_Lv1

gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

2yr
Baka_Chi_2549
Baka_Chi_2549Lv1

Well... I am here from Wattpad. Just to tell you all people you should definitely read this story. The grammar and spelling and writing style is leagues better than MOST of authors. Give it a read. 5/5 for me

2yr
Bloodicys
BloodicysLv4

This is one of the best TBATE fanfics I read, that fact that kiyotoka is MC is enough for me to give it 5 stars. The only thing I don’t like about it is the OC’s you introduced from his world but I guess I’m not used to this kind of troupe yet. I’ll see how it goes.

2yr
SeniorLong
SeniorLongLv3

the best tbate novel out there, great grammar, great depictions of ayanokoji and super good fighting scenes

2yr
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